FADE IN:
1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
The great ship moving into orbit of planet Ligon.
PICARD (V.O.)
Captain's log, stardate 41235.25.
Our location planet Ligon II,
source of a rare vaccine needed
on Federation planet Styris IV.
Starfleet has instructed me...
2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE
Full complement of crew at stations, DATA at OPS, GEORDI
at CONN. RIKER and TROI are flanking PICARD.
PICARD (V.O.)
(continuing)
... to engage in a friendly visit
and open treaty negotiations to
acquire this medicinal substance.
GEORDI
Standard orbit, sir.
RIKER
Lieutenant Yar is calling from
Cargo Bay One, sir. Standing by
to beam Ligonian welcoming party
aboard.
PICARD
(rising)
On our way. You have the helm,
Mister Data.
Picard leads Riker and Troi into FORWARD Turbolift.
3 INT. TURBOLIFT
as Picard, Riker and Troi ENTER and the door HISSES
closed behind them.
PICARD
(continuing; toward
controls)
Cargo One.
(to Riker and Troi)
Should be an interesting
experience.
RIKER
Agreed. Not only are they closely
humanoid but their history has
remarkable similarities to ours.
TROI
But a highly structured society
and they're exceedingly proud.
4 INT. CARGO DECK (OPTICAL)
Picard, Riker and Troi ENTER. Tasha is waiting there
with a pair of SECURITY GUARDS -- one with a tricorder.
TASHA
They've insisted on using their
own transporter device, sir...
PICARD
(nods)
It's their way, Lieutenant. Do
they have our coordinates?
Tasha indicates cleared area ahead of them on the Cargo
Bay deck.
TASHA
They have, sir. Precisely. And
they're standing by for your
signal.
PICARD
This is Captain Picard of the
Starfleet vessel Enterprise.
Please...
(looks to Troi; she
nods)
... please do us the honor of
visiting our vessel.
After only a moment, a slightly different kind of
TRANSPORTER EFFECT materializes five people. There are
four extremely tall, elegant Black Guards who form a
square.
They are bare-waisted with metal collars -- each with a
centered jewel -- and each wears a hakama (starched,
baggy trousers pulled between the legs).
Each has at least one major scar, and each carries a
bo (a bojutsu fighting staff). Each wears as headgear
a red, braided rope in a circular crown. One carries
a rolled carpet. They face forward at attention, but
their eyes take in everything.
The fifth person materializing is HAGON, who carries a
dull metallic box. He bends down and kicks the carpet
so that it unrolls towards Picard.
Then, LUTAN beams into view. He stands a moment, tall,
magnificent and with flashing eyes. His dress is more
elegant, his jewel more resplendent. The Security Guard
with the tricorder scans the party quickly, then nods to
Tasha.
TASHA
(quietly to Picard)
Nothing concealed, sir.
Lutan steps forward. He looks about him for a moment.
LUTAN
I am Lutan.
Picard moves to greet him, raising both hands in the
customary Ligonian greeting to show one is not holding
a weapon. Lutan nods, satisfied, and smiles. Without
touching, he holds his hands up in a like manner.
PICARD
Captain Jean-Luc Picard. Welcome
aboard. These are my officers.
Second in command, Commander
William Riker; Ship's Counselor
Deanna Troi; my security officer,
Lieutenant Tasha Yar.
LUTAN
A woman? Your Chief of Security?
PICARD
Yes, Lutan: that is her expertise.
Lutan and Hagon exchange a near-amused look. Then Lutan
turns to Picard.
LUTAN
I am honored to meet your
officers.
(indicates Hagon)
And this is my Secondary, Hagon.
(indicates)
A sample of the vaccine.
Hagon steps forward with the metal box, extending it
to Picard. But Tasha steps forward to take it.
TASHA
My duty, Lutan.
Almost before the words are out of Tasha's mouth, Hagon
grabs for the box.
TASHA
(continuing)
Sorry, I am required to inspect...
HAGON
Aside, little one...
Hagon whirls toward Picard forcing Picard to step back
to avoid contact, but Tasha reacts protecting her
Captain, with it ending in Hagon being flipped onto his
back. Lutan's guards step forward menacingly but are
stopped by a gesture from Lutan. Hagon looks up from
his prone position, more puzzled than anything else.
HAGON
(continuing)
This... this is a woman?
LUTAN
(inspecting Tasha)
How interesting!
(then, to Picard)
May we prove as surprising to you.
FADE OUT.
ACT ONE
FADE IN:
5 INT. CARGO DECK - FULL SHOT
Same principals in approximately the same positions as
last SCENE.
TROI
(low voice)
If I may suggest, sir...
She indicates for the Enterprise people to move back
and give Lutan and his people room and also time to
recover. In just above a whisper:
TROI
(continuing)
No apology. In their view, it
would weaken us.
6 EMPHASIZING LUTAN
Unlike Hagon and the Guards, he's beginning to enjoy
this as Riker picks up the container Hagon had been
holding, examines it and extends it to Picard.
RIKER
Nothing concealed, Captain.
(extends it)
Do you care to accept it?
HAGON
Yes, yes, please do.
LUTAN
(to Tasha)
Unless you care to examine it
further.
7 CLOSER GROUP SHOT
Picard seeing it is time to turn on the charm.
PICARD
Absolutely not. This vaccine
sample is a gift of life and we
are honored at receiving it.
(indicates way into
vessel)
Will you do us the honor of
letting us entertain you now?
LUTAN
(nodding)
You may prepare it. We will join
you shortly.
With nothing else to do, the Enterprise group LEAVES the
immediate area. They're not fools -- security people
remain in sight. Lutan and Hagon move closer together,
speak in low tones.
HAGON
I ask forgiveness....
LUTAN
(cuts him off)
They are strange alien things.
You bear no fault...
HAGON
But the female...
LUTAN
May be exactly what I've needed.
8 INT. LOUNGE - FULL SHOT
Data, BEVERLY and Troi are seen ENTERING, Data carrying
a magnificent bronze horse. Picard stands next to
Lutan.
PICARD
Lutan, we're aware of many of your
planet's achievements, and its
unique similarity to an ancient
Earth culture, which we all
admire. On behalf of the
Federation, therefore, I am proud
to present to you this token of
gratitude and friendship. From
China's Sung Dynasty, Fourteenth
Century.
DATA
(to Picard)
Thirteenth Century, sir.
PICARD
Indeed?
LUTAN
(accepting and admiring
it)
It is a most thoughtful gift.
We are grateful.
Lutan hands the horse to Hagon. Then, while watching
Tasha with interest:
LUTAN
(continuing)
We from Ligon have always been
apprehensive about strangers.
We are not as technologically
advanced as you; yet we possess
something you do not -- a vaccine
which has been found to be an
effective antidote to your deadly
Anchilles fever. If your conduct
toward us is worthy -- if you
respect our customs -- and if we
see this respect -- we will
become friends. Then, we will
make the vaccine available to all
who need it.
Everyone APPLAUDS. Lutan is proud and dignified. He
sweeps the gathering with his eyes, which hold on Tasha.
9 CLOSE SHOT - TASHA
She meets his gaze with confidence.
10 BACK TO FULL SHOT
The room quiets down as Picard rises.
PICARD
If you require respect from us,
I'm certain you will see it.
LUTAN
Surrounded by such friendship,
I have no need of my guards.
(to guards)
I will return shortly. Prepare
to transport me then.
The Guards signal obedience, begin EXITING. Picard and
the others are puzzled by this.
PICARD
If there is something else, any
final courtesy...
LUTAN
Is it possible to see one of your
wondrous holodecks? We have heard
how they are used to train your
officers.
Picard exchanges a quick, concerned look with Riker and
Troi.
PICARD
And used for many other things
too.
(turning)
Commander Riker, perhaps you and
Counselor Troi can demonstrate.
LUTAN
Is it possible for Lieutenant Yar
to do so Captain? Some
demonstration of defense training?
RIKER
We've noticed you are intrigued
by her having security
responsibilities. But such things
are not at all unusual with us.
HAGON
With us, it is the duty of women
only to own the land, and the duty
of men to protect and rule it.
TROI
(amused)
Much the same has happened in
human history too.
Picard smiles, then turns to Tasha questioningly. She
nods.
TASHA
I'd like to do it, sir.
(to Lutan)
As a sign of respect, perhaps.
PICARD
(nods agreement)
Very well.
Tasha beckons to Lutan and Hagon.
TASHA
This way, please.
A couple of Enterprise Security Guards follow.
11 INT. HOLODECK - FULL SHOT - OPTICAL (SPLIT SCREEN)
Tasha, followed by Lutan and Hagon, plus the two
security team members, who stay in the b.g. Tasha moves
to the wall controls. She punches in some commands,
reaches for an aikido jacket from a peg, then walks to
a bare area. She gives a CODED COMMAND.
TASHA
(continuing)
Aikido. One.
An Aikido Opponent MATERIALIZES (DISSOLVES IN) ON A MAT.
The IMAGE remains rigid, immobile. The visitors are
much impressed.
TASHA
(continuing; amicably)
It won't move until my actions
activate it.
12 CLOSER ON GROUP
Lutan stepping in to examine the Aikido Opponent,
amazed.
LUTAN
You can create people? Without
a soul?
TASHA
It's not a real person, Lutan.
It has no life. Everything it
does is controlled by computer.
She moves close to the image.
TASHA
(continuing; to the
image)
Who am I? Do you hear me?
The image doesn't move. But when Tasha suddenly feints,
the image instantly blocks the blow.
TASHA
(continuing)
But it will feel real when it hits
you.
She crouches and the IMAGE crouches, and they begin to
fight. After rapid and savage exchange, she throws the
IMAGE.
13 EMPHASIZING LUTAN
His eyes begin to glow as he evaluates what he sees,
watching with growing interest.
HAGON
A force like that cannot possibly
come from an image, Lutan.
LUTAN
Then you will show me, Hagon.
Hagon hesitates, but he has his order. He moves to the
mat as Tasha steps aside.
14 ACTION ANGLE
Hagon crouches, the image crouches. Hagon deftly makes
two feints, and then a move and is promptly dumped hard.
There's no doubt about the pain he feels.
HAGON
(trying to breathe)
Oh. . . . Oh...
LUTAN
(to Tasha)
Thank you, Lieutenant. How very
enlightening.
15 CLOSER ANGLE (OPTICAL)
Behind Tasha the IMAGE RISES and stands, remaining
quiet.
TASHA
(into the air)
Aikido, vanish.
The IMAGE DISSOLVES. Tasha goes to the panel, shuts
down the controls, takes a towel from the wall, wipes
off, and removes her jacket.
TASHA
(continuing)
I could create two -- even three,
but one is really enough. As you
fight with it, it learns, and
before long it knows exactly how
to defeat you.
LUTAN
(a smile)
Even the extraordinary Lieutenant
Yar?
TASHA
(also a smile)
It forces us to keep improving.
Lutan's eyes are glowing as he nods.
LUTAN
Your skill impresses me. I like
you.
Lutan shows a definite reaction to Tasha, and she
reacts to him similarly. Picard notices both
reactions.
16 INT. CARGO DECK - FULL SHOT (OPTICAL)
Our Enterprise participants are all present with Lutan
and Hagon. Good-byes are being exchanged.
LUTAN
(continuing)
Farewell, my new friends of the
noble Enterprise.
PICARD
Understanding has made friends
of many different people. We've
had a good beginning, Lutan.
LUTAN
May I also extend a personal
farewell to Lieutenant Yar?
Picard nods. Tasha moves forward. Lutan extends his
hand to her.
LUTAN
In your Federation terms.
Tasha takes his hand and shakes it. Lutan puts an arm
around her as if to hug her. Releasing his first hand,
but still holding her, he reaches up and touches the
jewel at the center of his necklace. In an instant
their images SHIMMER, and they are gone.
PICARD
Picard to bridge. Red alert!
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT ONE
ACT TWO
FADE IN:
17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
The KLAXON is sounding. Turbolift opens and Riker
ENTERS bridge immediately, crossing to man the
Security Station.
RIKER
Shields up; activate photon
torpedoes!
Picard and Troi have come out of the turbolift right
after him, CROSSING to their own positions.
PICARD
What com contact have we had with
them?
Data makes a move at his panel, the KLAXON ceases.
DATA
With their orbital control
station, sir.
PICARD
(reaches his position)
Make contact there and on all
hailing frequencies.
(touches control panel)
Enterprise to Lutan and Ligonian
government. You have committed
an unfriendly act. You will reply
immediately.
RIKER
Photon torpedoes ready, Captain.
PICARD
Set for a display blast, a
thousand meters short of planet
surface. Fire!
RIKER
Display blast away!
18 EXT. ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL)
as a spread of photon torpedoes are sent downward
toward the planet below.
18A ANGLE DOWN TOWARD PLANET (OPTICAL)
as the torpedo spread travels down toward the planet
surface, then detonates in a SPECTACULAR DISPLAY.
19 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
as all wait for some communication from the planet.
RIKER
(to Geordi)
Do we know the source of their
transporter beam?
GEORDI
Our own transporter people tried
to trace it, sir, but without
effect.
DATA
It reads similar to Starfleet's
early efforts but uses the
Heglenian shift to convert matter
and energy in different...
(stops; seeing Picard's
expression)
... which is actually not
important at this time.
PICARD
(touching panel com)
This is Captain Picard of the
Enterprise with a message to Lutan
whom I have so far acknowledged
as a friend. But you have now
committed what our laws regard
as an attack upon us, Lutan. And
having visited us here, Lutan,
you must certainly understand the
power of our vessel. We have so
far fired only a warning burst
at you. We insist you reply to
this message.
They again wait. Finally Picard turns to Troi:
PICARD
(continuing)
Opinion, Counselor. Will they
injure Tasha?
TROI
I believe not, sir. In fact, they
seem mainly curious. But in the
case of Lutan I did feel other
needs.
RIKER
What kind of needs?
TROI
Some sexual attraction from all
the males. Lieutenant Yar is
physically very attractive. But
I felt something else in the case
of Lutan... something more like...
avarice or ambition.
All puzzle at this.
PICARD
Other comments?
Data turns to Picard.
DATA
If I may, sir... one of the things
about them in the briefing studies
was their respect for patience.
RIKER
(nods)
Strongly emphasized. And you can
see it in the precise, ritualistic
way they do things. I'm worried
about Lieutenant Yar too, sir,
but maybe we should sit and wait
them out.
Picard considers this, then nods. He turns to Troi and
Data:
PICARD
Analysis, the two of you.
Everything we know about them and
how these happenings fit into
that.
20 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL)
Planet Ligon II below.
PICARD (V.O.)
Stardate 41235.32. I am
concerned. Over a full day of
waiting with no response from...
21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT
Only Geordi on duty with a couple of upper-deck
Technicians. During the following, BEVERLY CRUSHER will
ENTER Bridge and CROSS toward the Captain's Ready Room.
WE SEE WESLEY too; he waits in the Turbolift cab.
PICARD (V.O.)
(continuing)
... Lutan. We are now testing
whether they are aware of our
sensors probing them. So far,
we believe we have pinpointed
Lutan's government compound.
22 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM
Beverly ENTERS, joins Picard waiting inside. She's
very upset.
BEVERLY
The vaccine, sir...
PICARD
(rises)
Yes, Doctor?
BEVERLY
The vaccine...
(stops; shudders)
I'm a... physician; I've seen death.
But not on the scale this could
mean.
PICARD
Meanwhile, you were testing
whether we can replicate the
vaccine...
BEVERLY
And we can't! Their sample
works fine when used as an
injection, but it becomes unstable
when we try to replicate it. You
must get vaccine from the planet,
Captain. As much as you can.
Immediately!
PICARD
I'm aware of that, Doctor.
BEVERLY
You've never had to watch a
patient die from this disease.
PICARD
That's true. But I've seen my
share of death.
BEVERLY
Damn!
(weak smile; shakes her
head)
Where are the calluses we doctors
are supposed to grow over our
feelings?
PICARD
Perhaps the good ones never get
them.
Beverly moves toward the exit, then stops and turns,
eyes him for a long moment.
PICARD
(continuing; hopeful)
Yes, Doctor?
BEVERLY
(hesitates; then)
May I speak about my son Wesley?
PICARD
(startled)
What?
(recovers)
Well, yes. Yes, of course.
BEVERLY
He's so interested in starship
operations. And...
(smiles)
... speaking as a mother, of
course, he seems quite
knowledgeable. He’s talked about
nothing but the ship and Spider-Man
non-stop…needless to say I’d rather encourage
one obsession over the other…
PICARD
Well, yes...I would as well, speaking as a
Captain…
BEVERLY
(indicates;
interrupting)
He's on the turbolift. You'll
remember you ordered him to stay
off the bridge.
The whole subject upsets Picard but he feels trapped
now. And Beverly is remarkably lovely. He finally
motions for her to follow him toward the bridge.
23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE
Picard ENTERS from the Ready Room and CROSSES toward
his position. Beverly stays half concealed in the
Ready Room entry. In the b.g. at the turbolift, WE'LL
SEE Wesley quickly flatten himself almost out of sight.
But Picard keeps looking in that direction and this
fact finally forces Wesley SOMEWHAT INTO SIGHT.
24 ANGLE ON TURBOLIFT
Wesley finally comes more fully INTO VIEW and meets
Picard's eyes.
WESLEY
(weakly)
I haven't stepped one foot on your
bridge, Captain...
25 WIDER ANGLE
As the other turbolift arrives, from which Riker,
Data, and Troi ENTER to see Picard in an apparent
confrontation with Wesley. Riker moves in first,
speaking rapidly.
RIKER
It's all right, sir, I'll see he
leaves immediately...
WE SEE Picard throw a fast glance toward the Ready Room
where Beverly HAS APPEARED in the doorway.
PICARD
No.
25 CONTINUED:
RIKER
(halts)
No?
PICARD
(to Wesley)
Why don't you sit at Ops? Next
to Lieutenant La Forge.
WESLEY
Sir?
GEORDI
Sir?
PICARD
Is the whole ship deaf?!
(indicates)
Sit down over there, young man!
(beat)
Temporarily.
26 ANGLE ON WESLEY
CROSSING to sit next to Geordi, eyeing the Bridge, the
vessel's controls. Heaven!
27 BACK TO SHOT
TROI
Captain, we have more information
from the briefing studies on
Ligon...
PICARD
Excuse me.
(calls)
Doctor Crusher, some of this may
interest you.
28 ANOTHER ANGLE
to include Beverly STEPPING INTO VIEW, CROSSING to join
the group at the command position. Except for Troi,
all feel a moment of discomfort with Beverly appearing
from the Ready Room and Wesley at the Ops position.
28 CONTINUED:
PICARD
(continuing)
Proceed with your analysis.
DATA
It is a highly structured society
in which people live by strict
codes of honor. For example, what
Lutan has done is similar to what
certain American Indians once did,
called "counting coup." That's
from an obscure language called
French --
PICARD
A language which for centuries
on Earth represented civilization,
Mister Data.
DATA
Indeed?
RIKER
I suggest you drop it, Mister
Data.
A puzzled Data shrugs, goes on.
DATA
Yes sir. Counting coup could be
as simple as touching an enemy
with a stick in battle, or taking
something from him and escaping.
It was considered extremely
heroic.
RIKER
And under these circumstances
Lutan considers himself heroic,
risking literally everything in
the face of our superior power.
TROI
And it fits Lutan's personality
profile as well. He has an
abnormally high need for
achievement -- I've sensed it in
him, very strongly.
Picard nods.
28 CONTINUED: (2)
TROI
(continuing)
We should establish clearly also,
that Lutan is dangerous. Self
image for him is a function of
how much he THINKS he's achieved.
Those who set their standards too
high can kill to meet them.
BEVERLY
Why Tasha?
TROI
As a Starfleet security officer,
she may have represented his
riskiest prize.
29 ANGLE EMPHASIZING DATA
responding to a signal panel, then:
DATA
(to Picard)
Transmission from the planet
surface, sir... Main viewer on.
30 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL)
where an image of Lutan replaces the orbit planet SHOT.
PICARD
Yes, Lutan? What do you wish?
Lutan is squinting, his screen apparently without
Picard's image there.
LUTAN
You will display your image,
please.
PICARD
What is required is an image of
Lieutenant Yar, well and...
LUTAN
(interrupting)
Are you making demands, Captain?
TROI
Sir...
She motions; Picard cuts off his transmission.
TROI
(continuing)
According to the Ligon Code of
Honor, Lutan has done what he set
out to do -- achieve recognition
for being daring and bold.
RIKER
We've studied this in some depth
now, sir. The proper thing for
you to do now is to ask to get
Tasha back.
PICARD
(astonished)
Ask for her?
DATA
Politely, Captain.
PICARD
(touches com button)
And now, Lutan...
(swallows irritation)
You have boldly taken the
lieutenant from us and I ask that
you... now please return her.
LUTAN
Then come visit us, Captain, and
we will return her to you.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT TWO
ACT THREE
FADE IN:
31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING RIKER
as he activates his panel com. Troi watches,
expressionless as:
RIKER
First Officer to Transporter
Chief...
TROI
(interrupts)
Forgive me but can you delay
calling him?
DATA
(nods agreement)
Please. We must discuss the away
party.
PICARD
Am I included?
32 ANGLE ON WESLEY
at Ops position but distracted by what is going on.
DATA (O.S.)
It concerns you directly, Captain.
BEVERLY (O.S.)
Wesley. It's time we left.
33 WIDER ANGLE - TO INCLUDE BEVERLY
moving to the turbolift which she is indicating to
Wesley. He stands, disappointed that it's over. Picard
sees this.
PICARD
Wesley... thanks for taking a turn
at the controls.
WESLEY
Yes sir.
That has changed everything. A buoyant Wesley leaves
the bridge with his mother.
33 CONTINUED:
TROI
Commander....
RIKER
"Commander?" That's quite
formal...
TROI
So is this request, sir. We
believe it would be preferable
if the captain led this away
party.
DATA
Agreed, sir. Their customs
concerning guests make it much
preferable.
RIKER
(to Picard)
And I'm very much against it.
Lutan is clearly a liar, and
devious. Counselor Troi has
admitted she believes him capable
of killing. It is my duty to keep
the captain out of danger, sir.
DATA
Except that Ligonian custom makes
it clear that a visiting leader
becomes an honored guest.
(indicates)
Not us, not second in command...
him.
TROI
And the custom requires Lutan to
die rather than violate that.
Picard says nothing, waits for Riker to absorb all this.
Then:
RIKER
Yes... it does sound reasonable
put that way.
(to Picard)
I warn you, Captain... if you get
hurt, I'll put you on report!
This gets smiles from everyone.
34 EXT. LUTAN'S CENTERPLACE ON LIGON - ESTABLISHING
(OPTICAL)
This enclosed, sanded area, walled in black, has an
ascetic, Zen-garden feeling with a pebbled center
enclosing a small, off-center fountain. A single,
simple, brilliant banner identifies this an important
place, and whatever design elements are visible reveal
an interest in the abstract, perhaps a Mondrian-ish
feeling. Two sentries are posted beside a doorway.
Picard and Troi BEAM INTO SHOT. Lutan and Hagon come
from inside the doorway and exchange the "empty hands"
ritual greeting with Picard.
LUTAN
Welcome to my Centerplace, Captain
Picard. Consider yourselves my
honored guests.
YAREENA (O.S.)
Every hospitality will be accorded
you.
ADJUST ANGLE to include YAREENA, who has just joined
them. She is petite by Ligonian standards and quite
radiant, a woman of visible nobility and keen
intelligence. Her only flaw being her passionate,
unreasoning love for Lutan.
LUTAN
This is my First One, Yareena.
PICARD
Lutan is a fortunate man.
She smiles graciously, but remains a bit behind him,
according to custom.
PICARD
(continuing)
You've met Counselor Troi.
LUTAN
Yes.
(to Picard)
As on your vessel, you have only
to name whatever courtesy we can
provide.
PICARD
Then, sir... the courtesy of
seeing Lieutenant Yar.
LUTAN
Lieutenant Yar will be returned
to you tonight at a banquet I have
arranged in your honor.
PICARD
I would like to see her now.
LUTAN
(thinks; then, to a
sentry)
Bring Lieutenant Yar.
(to Picard)
I find it odd, Captain, that a
man of your experience has such
difficulty in understanding
ordinary politeness.
PICARD
Such as saying "please" when
abducting someone?
LUTAN
The expression "please" is used
only when requesting the person
back.
PICARD
Yours is a different world.
LUTAN
With clear and simple ways deeply
rooted in our culture. If you
are willing to ask for Lieutenant
Yar's release tonight in front
of all, honor will be satisfied.
TROI
(to Picard)
One can see the importance of
"honor" here.
LUTAN
Honor is everything.
Picard and Troi exchange looks.
HAGON
There will be gifts for each of
you, to absolve the abduction.
Tasha is brought to the doorway between four guards,
with every sign she would break free at the slightest
opportunity. One of the guards limps, a leg bandaged.
When Tasha sees Picard she calms down.
PICARD
Lieutenant, have you been treated
well?
TASHA
Fine, Captain...
(indicates bandaged
guard; smiles)
... but they're showing some signs
of wear.
YAREENA
There isn't any need to be
concerned, Captain. She's being
well cared for.
Picard looks Tasha over, then turns to Lutan.
PICARD
My ship's company and I are
certain of your gentle wisdom in
that.
Lutan hesitates, takes another look at Picard. Then:
LUTAN
I thought for a moment I heard
a threat implied.
(shrugs)
But that would be foolishness.
PICARD
Something to be carefully avoided
I agree.
LUTAN
The festivities for her return
to you are in preparation. Shall
we retire until then?
Lutan gestures to the guards, who move to take Tasha
OFF, without resistance. CAMERA PUSHES IN on Picard as
he replies and considers what is ahead.
PICARD
Until tonight, Lutan.
35 EXT. CENTERPLACE - ESTABLISHING - NIGHT
Under a canopy, a juggler performs. Guests sit on floor
mats or cushions. All carry hand-held, delicately
carved ivory-like sticks which they tap together to
signal applause or approval. Tables are low and food is
plentiful. ESTABLISH Lutan and Yareena sitting on a
slightly raised dais, with Hagon next to him on floor
level, and Lutan's Supporters close around them. The
juggler drops something and suddenly stops. He has
committed an act of dishonor.
36 ANGLE ON PICARD AND TROI
Picard and Troi scan the room, hoping to see Tasha. A
sudden SCREAM from the direction where the juggler had
performed.
37 FULL SHOT
Picard and Troi whirl to look in that direction but
their line of sight is quickly blocked by gift bearers
who APPEAR, with Ligonian silks, works of precious
metal, and fine large gems. Picard is troubled by what
may have happened to the juggler but is distracted by
the gift bearers making presentations. Then the room
falls SILENT.
LUTAN
We present you gifts!
38 CLOSER SHOT
as Tasha is escorted in to approving IVORY-TAPPING
sounds from the Ligonians who face Lutan. Tasha is
seated next to Lutan and Yareena on an empty cushion.
She smiles at Picard and Troi. At FULL SILENCE Lutan
turns and fixes his gaze on Picard. The moment has
arrived. Picard rises and faces Lutan with great
dignity.
PICARD
Lutan, you have granted us
hospitality and the safety of your
Centerplace. The gifts you give
us are rare and precious. We
thank you. In accordance with
the customs of your ancestors,
which I honor and respect, I am
here in peace to ask for the
return of Lieutenant Yar.
The Guests CHIME WILDLY now, nodding in enthusiastic
approval. Yareena is especially proud and pleased.
CAMERA TO LUTAN, who smiles and rises, CAMERA MOVING
SLOWLY BACK.
LUTAN
Well spoken. There are some among
my equals in this gathering who
were wary of my approaching the
Federation. I am proud to have
taken this first step towards a
treaty -- and proud we have
something of great value to offer
you -- a priceless life-giving
vaccine.
(beat)
The abduction I have done
according to our custom, for all
to see.
(great applause)
Your conduct in this matter has
been beyond exemplary, Captain
Picard --
(glances at Tasha)
-- but now that the moment has
come, I find I cannot part with
her.
A ripple of astonishment flows through the crowd in the
room. Picard takes a step forward. Tension.
PICARD
You speak of a code of honor...
but what you are now saying is
called under our customs... an
act of war.
LUTAN
No, no, Captain! You do not
understand.
PICARD
Correct! I am now beyond
understanding!
LUTAN
This is not an act of war, but
of love. I want Lieutenant Yar
to become my First One.
There is general astonishment. Yareena is as shocked
and outraged as Picard and Troi. Hagon is also
disturbed. Yareena jumps to her feet.
YAREENA
I challenge your right of
supercedence!
The Guests in the room are stunned.
HAGON
(at Yareena)
No woman has challenged
supercedence for over two-hundred
years!
YAREENA
The right is mine -- and I will
have it!
(then to Tasha, furious)
Natasha Yar -- I challenge you!
A struggle to the death!
ZOOM IN and PAN to include QUICK REACTION SHOTS from
Tasha and Troi. Then, ZOOM BACK as Picard jumps to his
feet.
PICARD
(strongly)
NO! The challenge is
unequivocally refused!
There is a stunned SILENCE. Lutan rises to his feet,
eyes blazing.
LUTAN
Then you shall have no treaty --
no vaccine -- and no Lieutenant
Yar!
39 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
It maintains orbit around Ligon.
RIKER (V.O.)
Ship's log, First Officer Riker
reporting. We have been informed
of the challenge to Lieutenant
Yar...
40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FEATURING SCIENCE AND TACTICAL
Riker tours the stations checking readouts, while
continuing his log. A FULL CREW is on station.
RIKER
(continuing)
... and are maintaining combat
readiness round-the-clock. We
are probing Lutan's compound
deeply with our sensors now, still
unnoticed.
41 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT
Tasha, doing exercises, straightens up as Picard and
Troi ENTER SHOT. During the following scene Troi does
nothing except listen intently. A Ligon Guard patrols.
TASHA
Captain. Deanna.
PICARD
Did you have any idea, Lieutenant,
that Lutan would suddenly announce
he wanted you for his First One?
What do you know of this?
TASHA
Nothing, sir.
TROI
(as if to herself)
But it was a thrill. Lutan is
such... such a basic male image
and having him say he wants you...
TASHA
(nods)
Yes, of course it made me feel
good...
Then she becomes aware that Picard is watching this
closely. She turns on Troi:
TASHA
(continuing)
Troi! I'm your friend and you
tricked me!
TROI
Only so you'll think about it
completely and clearly.
41 CONTINUED:
PICARD
(to Tasha)
We're all being manipulated,
Lieutenant, and most of all
myself.
TROI
(scrutinizing Picard)
How simple all this would be
without the Prime Directive.
PICARD
(nods; half-amused)
That thought has passed through
my mind, Counselor.
42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON RIKER
at the command position, looking toward his panel
communications. The turbolift doors open, Beverly
HURRIES onto the bridge.
RIKER
What's this message from Starbase
Fourteen?
43 WIDER ANGLE
Beverly hurries to indicate Riker's viewer.
BEVERLY
It's showing infection rates,
percentage illness increases...
(looks up)
The plague on Styris IV has
flared up out of control.
Riker takes another moment to study the information
received.
RIKER
Oh, no!
43 CONTINUED:
GEORDI
(studying his own
viewer)
They're estimating deaths in the
millions, sir.
RIKER
(hits com control)
Captain Picard, come in.
44 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT
The lighting in the room low, Troi trying to nap but
with Tasha disturbing this.
TASHA
I know I could win. Not that I'd
take her life, of course, but I'd
be glad to embarrass her. The
idea of accusing me...
Interrupted by Picard ENTERING with guards still in
b.g. Troi is immediately alert at the captain's
presence.
TROI
The plague?
PICARD
If anything, worse than we heard.
TASHA
Which means they desperately need
the vaccine, sir. And I know
I can win this challenge...
PICARD
You do not have to prove anything
here, Lieutenant.
TROI
But the vaccine is important in
this case, sir... ?
PICARD
Counselor, I would consider you
the last person to argue for
Lieutenant Yar to accept that
challenge.
44 CONTINUED:
TROI
Betazoid blood is also practical,
Captain.
(indicates Tasha)
The odds are very good she'd
defeat Lutan's wife easily and
you would win all the bargaining
points you need.
PICARD
"The odds are... ?"
TROI
As you have pointed out yourself,
we are all at risk every day of
every mission.
Picard gives her a searching look, glancing at
Tasha.
PICARD
I'll want some explanations from
Lutan.
TROI
But why not let him volunteer
them, Captain? His needs for
approval are immense. I'm sure
if you found something you liked
about him, he'd be anxious to
agree with it.
TASHA
(laughs)
Yes, he would indeed. He's almost
crippled with needs, the poor
handsome dear.
Picard considers this, then EXITS.
45 INT. CENTERPLACE BANQUET AREA - NIGHT
Lutan and Hagon are still in the empty Banquet Hall,
talking and finishing a drink. Picard ENTERS.
PICARD
I should tell you I do admire the
hospitality you offer here, Lutan.
A pity you began by abducting my
security officer.
45 CONTINUED:
LUTAN
I am in the grip of forces you
do not understand.
PICARD
(hesitates; nods)
Some of it I do understand. She
is a rather lovely female...
LUTAN
You surprise me, Captain. What
do you know of needs and feelings?
PICARD
Nothing.
(pretends to hesitate;
smiles)
Well, almost nothing in my
position of ship's captain.
HAGON
(chuckles)
Aha, I see.
PICARD
(smiles now)
But it puzzles me; if you feel that
way about Tasha, why have you
challenged her to a fight to the
death?
LUTAN
Not I, Yareena! I am merely a
spectator.
PICARD
But you are also a man of great
importance and wealth.
HAGON
Great importance, perhaps...
Lutan has tried to stop what Hagon has said, but moves
too slowly. Picard then chuckles.
PICARD
Aha, I see. Then you too
understand the proper value of
women?
LUTAN
We understand they are highly
pleasant things... but after all,
unimportant, except for the land
they own.
PICARD
You're a truly clever person,
Lutan. You have nothing to lose
either way the challenge goes.
46 CLOSER TWO SHOT
as Lutan smiles.
LUTAN
A code of honor, Captain, protects
one like a magic cloak.
PICARD
(a long pause; then)
I will order Lieutenant Yar to
fight.
(rises)
And may your cloak bring you all
you deserve, Lutan.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT THREE
ACT FOUR
FADE IN:
47 INT. ENTERPRISE - GEORDI'S QUARTERS
Geordi is standing alone in his room, his glasses on
a table. Without his VISOR his eyes are dead grey.
He holds a glowing 2-inch blue cube in his hand which
he moves up, down and across his face an inch or so away
from the skin. He is shaving. There is a CHIME from
his door.
GEORDI
Come in.
Data ENTERS, stops short as he sees the razor Geordi
is using.
DATA
Why that razor, my friend? Why
not the one I adjusted into
perfect efficiency?
GEORDI
Shaving is a human art form, Data.
Technological perfection can shave
too close.
DATA
Puzzling. How can anything be
too efficient?
GEORDI
Tens of thousands of things. Maybe
hundreds.
DATA
(puzzles over it; then)
We always go back to the human
equation.
GEORDI
Exactly. Have you kept working
on it?
DATA
Constantly, my friend.
(MORE)
DATA (Cont'd)
(nods)
Particularly human humor. For
example, a man goes to a store
to buy some kidneys. He says to
the shopkeeper, "I'd like a pound
of kiddillies, please." The
shopkeeper says to him, "You mean
kidneys, don't you?" The man
says, "I said kiddillies, diddle
I?"
Long silence.
GEORDI
It's too old. And you didn't tell
it very well.
DATA
... How do you know when
something's funny?
GEORDI
It's not explainable. You just
do.
DATA
Perhaps it is you, Geordi.
Includling the kiddillies, I've
learned six hundred sixty-two
jokes, and you haven't...
Data stops, realizing Geordi is laughing.
GEORDI
(still chuckling)
"Includling the kiddillies!" Now
that's funny.
DATA
It was not meant as a joke!
The tongue slipped!
Geordi CHUCKLES even more at this. He puts away his
razor, begins to fit his VISOR in place.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
Riker to Commander Data,
Lieutenant La Forge. Report to
the Transporter Room for away
party duty.
Both men move out quickly.
48 INT. WEAPONS ROOM ON LIGON - DAY (OPTICAL)
Picard and Troi are examining weapons exhibited in the
room. Unusual looking pikes, daggers, spiked gloves,
unusual looking blast guns, nets, scythes, all bizarre
and unfamiliar types.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
First officer to captain. Ready
with the away personnel.
PICARD
(touches insignia)
Lock in on this location.
TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE
Transporter locked in, sir.
PICARD
Energize!
A short delay, then Data and Geordi BEAM IN. Data
carries a large tricorder.
PICARD
(continuing)
You've both seen the message about
the plague?
GEORDI
(nods)
And how badly the vaccine is
needed. Yes sir.
PICARD
We need to know as much as
possible about Ligonian arms and
armaments. Data, especially
important will be an analysis of
their combat capabilities.
Geordi, concentrate on their
cutting edges where applicable,
durability, composition,
weaknesses of material.
GEORDI
Aye, sir.
DATA
From any particular point of view,
sir?
TROI
From the perspective of Lieutenant
Yar's using them in combat with
Lutan's wife.
Geordi is stunned; Data is curious.
GEORDI
Are you...
(begins again)
You, you're serious, I can see
that.
DATA
Most interesting.
(to Geordi)
Could this be human joke number
six hundred sixty-three?
GEORDI
Negative, Data! It's a captain's
order!
DATA
Which makes it important to
know...
(indicates)
... which of these weapons are to
be used.
PICARD
That fact isn't known until the
combat begins.
Data and Geordi turn to the weapons to begin examining
them. Picard turns toward the exit with Troi, then
stops and turns back to Data.
PICARD
(continuing)
You're right, Data. It does sound
like a joke. With the power of
the Enterprise, we could overwhelm
this place easily. Take what we
want.
DATA
I may not understand human humor,
sir, but I am a Starfleet Academy
graduate.
PICARD
Which means, of course...
DATA
... understanding the Prime
Directive, sir.
PICARD
Which is, unfortunately, what this
is about. By our standards, the
customs here and code of honor
are the same kind of pompous,
strutting charades that endangered
our own species a few centuries
ago. We evolved out of it because
no one else imposed their own...
(stops; shakes head
ruefully)
Sorry, that became a speech.
TROI
You're the captain, sir. You're
entitled...
PICARD
(smiles)
Mm, not entitled to ramble on about something everyone knows.
Carry on.
The others have returned his smile as he and Troi EXIT.
49 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
in orbit around Ligon.
RIKER (V.O.)
Ship's log, Commander William
Riker reporting. Stardate
41235.4.
50 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Riker walks past the rear readouts, taking a moment to
study them.
RIKER (V.O.)
(continuing)
Continuing our appraisal of
Ligonian technology. The Captain
has made it clear...
... he wants Lieutenant Yar beamed
immediately to safety if her life
should become endangered... and
I fervently hope the rules of that
contest make it possible.
RIKER
Riker to Transporter Room. Do you
have our people on the sensors yet?
TRANSPORTER CHIEF (V.O.)
Their general area, sir. Visual on
screen now.
Riker presses a button on a nearby console and looks.
51 OMITTED
52 CLOSE ON COMPUTER SCREEN (INSERT) (OPTICAL)
The screen lists every name in the away party.
Alongside each name triangulation coordinates APPEAR.
They change as those who move change location.
TRANSPORTER CHIEF (V.O.)
(continuing)
As you see, we're still doing some
fine tuning.
53 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT
Tasha is alone as Yareena ENTERS.
YAREENA
I agreed to this meeting, but I
see no point to it. You have
accepted the challenge; there is
nothing further to say.
TASHA
I think you should know that there
is no physical training anywhere
that matches Starfleet, especially
its security people.
YAREENA
And you should know that even
though these contests are rare,
we have a tradition of making
ourselves capable of them.
TASHA
Yareena, my acceptance had nothing
to do with Lutan.
YAREENA
It has everything to do with
Lutan. Lutan wants you to be his
First One.
TASHA
Impossible, Yareena. I am a career
Starfleet officer...
YAREENA
How could you not love him? Every
woman loves him!
TASHA
Yareena, I fight for the
vaccine... That's the truth.
YAREENA
The truth is I will kill you if
I can. And believe me, I can.
There is nothing else to say.
TASHA
In my world it's a greater honor
to refuse to ...
YAREENA
(interrupting)
You are on our world!
Yareena whirls, EXITS.
54 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - NIGHT
The room is similar to Tasha's, but less elegant and
much smaller. Picard paces.
TROI
Captain, I'm your counselor. You
brought me with you to Ligon to
be of help.
PICARD
Then help me, please. What is
a way out of this?
TROI
With the vaccine?
(shakes head)
None. Not under the rules we
believe in.
There is a KNOCK. A Guard opens the door to admit Data
and Geordi.
GEORDI
The weapons in that room are
surprisingly durable and
flexible... and deadly.
DATA
And light, as if they're made for
women to use.
GEORDI
Some of them still have traces
of blood -- and poison.
PICARD
(reacting)
Poison?
GEORDI
Alkaloid base. Deadly.
DATA
But we found no indication it is
invariably used, sir. Or ever,
in contests like this.
PICARD
A theory, Data. What would be
the best defense against weapons
like these?
DATA
Undiminished attack because of
the possibility of poison, sir.
PICARD
What about those lengths of metal
in the yard outside?
DATA
Uncertain, sir. However, joined
together they would make a
rectangle or square enclosing one
hundred twenty-one square meters.
If put end-to-end vertically,
they would make a pole forty-four
meters high, or two of twenty-two
meters, or...
PICARD
Thank you, Data.
DATA
You are welcome, sir.
A KNOCK on the door. Tasha is ushered in by the guard.
TASHA
She won't budge. She loves him
-- without reservation.
(to them all)
And she thinks I love him too.
DATA
Most interesting. Do you?
TASHA
Of course I don't, Data! As Troi
pointed out to me, I'm attracted
to him but that is entirely
different.
DATA
How so?
Picard is becoming amused at this.
PICARD
I'll agree it is puzzling, Data,
but since it involves Tasha's very
intimate and personal...
TASHA
It involves nothing I'm ashamed
of!
(to Data)
In fact, you may discover that
the very worst move of your life
was when you threw in with flesh
and blood humans.
DATA
(nodding gravely)
But certainly the most
interesting.
TASHA
Interesting? Data, I grew up on
a failed colony, completely
lawless, mad, where people took
what they wanted. This meant
males for the reason they're
bigger, stronger...
(to Troi)
And that's why I chose Starfleet
security, I guess.
TROI
(nods)
For reasons you should be very
proud of.
TASHA
(to Data)
Those were my early interests...
strength, daring, dominant
males... and that's why Lutan
attracts me. To me, he's like
a Federation Olympic Games hero.
But do I want to become his
so-called "First One," marry him?
That would be nonsense!
55 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD
A pause, then Picard draws himself up into a pose
resembling Data, and:
PICARD
Most interesting.
DATA
(turning, nodding)
Ah! You feel that also!
Smiles from all present. Picard now turns to Tasha,
very serious.
PICARD
And having laid all that out,
Lieut...
(corrects self)
Tasha... we come to a most serious
question...
RIKER'S COM VOICE
Riker to captain.
Picard touches his insignia.
PICARD
Go ahead. We're alone.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
We're fine tuned enough to see
your hosts gathering in the open
area outside with a number of them
now headed for your location.
PICARD
Thank you, Number One.
(turning to Tasha)
I was about to ask if considering
that background, your apprehension
by Lutan, all of that... do you
still feel ready to undergo this
challenge? Do you judge your
condition good?
From the door a LOUD KNOCK.
TASHA
I judge it excellent, sir.
Another KNOCK, insistent. Picard nods to Geordi who
opens the door. It REVEALS Hagon with TWO GUARDS who
carry two lacquered boxes each. The four boxes (the
SIZE OF HAT-BOXES) are labeled one through four by
ornate dot patterns. The boxes are placed on a low table.
HAGON
Your weapons, Lieutenant Yar.
You may pick your size.
They EXIT. Tasha goes slowly to the boxes, and opens
first one and then the others. She picks one glavin up
and holds it for the others to see. They look at it
with awe. It is a gauntlet-length oversized glove,
bulbous and almost basketball size. On the inside of
the wrist a down-curved claw projects. Out of the glove
itself stick a profusion of slender eight-inch long
needles, as if from a porcupine. A thin transparent
shield covers them. Tasha removes the cover.
56 CLOSE SHOT - THE GLAVIN IN TASHA'S HANDS
revealing the above details, but without any poison
demarcation.
GEORDI (V.O.)
Don't touch the spines! They're
poisoned.
57 OMITTED
58 BACK TO SHOT
Tasha looks at the glavin carefully, hefts it, touches
it, estimating it. Geordi comes over and looks at it
with her.
GEORDI
If you're not careful you could
kill yourself.
TASHA
(looks at spines; shakes
head)
These I understand.
From outside, they HEAR a metallic CLANGING. They stop,
and go to the window.
59 THEIR POV OUTSIDE - NIGHT
Outside, in the CENTERPLACE, the sharpened lengths of
steel have been vertically attached within a multi-level
rectangle. A number of these poles have horizontal
segments connecting them. Yareena, wearing workout
clothing, is maneuvering quickly from level to level,
carefully avoiding the sharpened spikes. She wears the
glavin on her left hand only, and uses the claw to give
her leverage while swinging over and under the
horizontal bars. It's obvious, as she climbs and jabs
and slashes out, that she's very good at this. She
never makes a mistake; the projecting needles never
touch a pole, and she never makes a misstep. Below her,
eight metallic objects outline the boundary of the
arena. Between each of these, perhaps twenty inches off
the ground, a brilliant green LIGHT BEAM defines the
outer limit of the rectangle. As a workman puts the
finishing touches on this apparatus, four additional
green LIGHT BEAMS suddenly appear, emanating straight
upward, from the four corners of the centermost section.
To check them, he interrupts one of the beams with a
stick of wood. It SIZZLES and begins to BURN.
60 BACK TO SHOT
They look at one another.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT FOUR
ACT FIVE
FADE IN:
61 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
The starship steady in her orbit.
RIKER (V.O.)
First Officer's log, supplemental.
Captain Picard, faced with a
critical need for a vaccine
produced on this planet...
62 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ESTABLISHING, THEN PANNING RIKER
during which, he leaves his command position, CROSSES
toward the turbolift. A crewman is at Conn, rear
stations are manned.
RIKER (V.O.)
(continuing)
... has permitted Lieutenant
Natasha Yar to engage in a fight
to the death. I have yet to
understand his reasoning or his
plan.
Reaching the turbolift, Riker discovers Wesley standing
half out of sight inside -- off the bridge. He stops;
they eye each other. Then, gesturing:
RIKER
Care to lend a hand?
WESLEY
Yes sir!
He bounds onto the Bridge as Riker EXITS by Turbolift.
63 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL)
as Data BEAMS IN. When fully arrived he turns to the
Transporter Chief who is monitoring his viewer...
DATA
Was I seen leaving?
63 CONTINUED:
TRANSPORTER CHIEF
(shakes head)
They've got eyes only for the
program.
Riker ENTERS, Data nods at him. Then he includes
Transporter Chief, saying:
DATA
Captain Picard wanted no risk of
our communications being
overheard. You're to proceed now,
as he indicated.
Beverly Crusher ENTERS over the last of this. She
carries a medical tricorder and a couple of instruments
including a contact hypo. She indicates these to Riker.
BEVERLY
Captain's orders here, too.
RIKER
(to Data)
Does the Captain understand what
you and Geordi reported about
those weapons? They're razor
sharp, split-second lethal...
DATA
(nods)
I am here to brief you on what he
plans.
64 INT. CENTERPLACE - NIGHT
The Centerplace is alive with a gathering group of
official spectators, who are seating themselves around
Lutan and Hagon. Picard, Troi, Geordi, followed by
Tasha and a guard, ENTER SHOT. Tasha wears the
glavin with its protective covering. We begin to HEAR
A RATTLE of ivory-like sticks from the Spectators.
TASHA
(to Picard)
Any last minute instructions, sir?
64 CONTINUED:
PICARD
(nods; then)
Stay alive. We'll hope to do the
rest.
65 ANGLE TO INCLUDE YAREENA
as she ENTERS with a Female Aide. LOUDER LIGONIAN
RATTLING. A Guard motions Yareena and Tasha into the
combat area. A worker prepares to activate the
light-beam boundary. When it's quiet, Hagon rises
and addresses the gathering.
HAGON
I speak for Lutan. The rules are
known; let combat continue until
there is a victor. It will not
be interrupted.
(looks at combatants)
Proceed.
Again a RATTLING OF STICKS as Tasha and Yareena ENTER
the structure at opposite sides. The worker ACTIVATES
the LIGHT-BEAM boundary. Then SILENCE from the
Spectators as Tasha and Yareena immediately begin
working their way through the structure.
66 CLOSER ON THE COMBAT - NIGHT - (INTERCUT WITH
SPECTATOR REACTION)
Tasha goes quickly for the center to defend from there,
not sure exactly what to expect. Yareena, very sure of
herself, climbs with agility. The glavin never gets too
near her body. The glavins CLANG as each of the women
climbs.
67 CLOSE ON YAREENA
Her eyes bright, her expression cold. She appears to
always figure at least one move ahead.
68 CLOSE ON TASHA
learning as she goes. She makes her moves without
flare, steadily and carefully feeling her way. At the
moment, it looks as if she's no match for Yareena.
69 ON THEM BOTH - COMBAT SQUARE ONLY
Yareena suddenly speeds up, agilely climbing higher than
Tasha. Gracefully, she also circles to get behind her.
Tasha turns barely quickly enough to defend herself.
Stopping, darting away, and coming from unexpected
angles, Yareena forces Tasha to change position. Tasha
at first clambers horizontally, then, aware of what's
happening, climbs higher to get away from her, but can't
do it without turning her back.
Yareena jabs out at her, managing to drive and corner
her on the highest level of the arena. Again she jabs
with her glavin, just missing. There's a GASP from the
audience. Yareena inches closer, leaning out and
continuing to jab.
70 ANGLE ON LUTAN
Not at all as unconcerned as he indicates to Picard.
71 CLOSE ON TASHA
Tasha folds her arms and dives beneath the horizontal
pole, landing on her feet -- but loses her balance, and
falls within the innermost section.
72 BACK TO SHOT
Instantly, Yareena climbs toward her for the kill. As
she raises her glavin to strike the final blow, her arm
extends too far back, causing a metallic section of the
glavin to brush against one of the brightly glowing
vertical LIGHT BEAMS. This results in a shower of
SPARKS and a reactive force so strong that it throws
Yareena's arm forward with such speed that the glavin
is hurled out of the arena and into the first row of
spectators.
73 ANGLE ON LUTAN
Lutan rises, shouting.
LUTAN
Combatants, hold your positions!
(he turns to a guard)
Return the weapon!
73 CONTINUED:
Yareena and Tasha remain stationary as a smiling
spectator, into whose lap the glavin has fallen,
gingerly hands it to the guard. His smile quickly turns
to a grimace of horror as he notices a thin line of
blood on his thigh. His face contorts as the poison
instantly takes effect. As the glavin is carefully
returned to Yareena, WE SEE two sentries removing the
spectator's body.
74 CLOSE ON THEM BOTH
With Yareena re-armed, Tasha aggressively advances
toward her.
75 ANGLE ON HAGON
Very concerned now.
HAGON
Yareena! Careful!
76 ANGLE ON ARENA
Tasha moves rapidly to the outside, drawing Yareena up
to follow her, then simulates losing her balance and
fake-falls, flailing, toward the ground. She appears to
be caught on the lower rungs without being able to free
herself. Yareena drops deftly to her feet alongside
her, stands over her and is about to shove the deadly
spines of the glavin into her when Tasha kicks out with
her foot, catching Yareena's leg. Yareena stumbles.
Tasha gets to her feet and hurls herself at Yareena,
getting on top of her. Her claw grazes Yareena's
shoulder, ripping her garment and causing blood to flow.
STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 54.
77 ANGLE EMPHASIZING YAREENA
staring in horror at the thin TRAIL of blood. She
starts slowly to rise up. The spectators gasp, waiting
for Yareena to die.
78 ANGLE EMPHASIZING TASHA (OPTICAL)
as she suddenly throws herself bodily across Yareena
and both of them begin to SHIMMER -- and then are BEAMED
AWAY.
79 FULL SHOT
The crowd rises to its feet in surprise, then anger and
SHOUTING. They begin to throw their ivory-like sticks
toward the arena, then at our Away Party which quickly
moves to one side, standing close.
80 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL)
Security -- and Beverly, Data, and Riker -- are waiting
as the supine bodies of Tasha and Yareena appear on the
transporter pads.
RIKER
Move!
Tasha rises as security people grab Yareena and very
carefully remove her glavin. She appears to be almost
dead -- perhaps completely so. Tasha removes her own.
Beverly moves forward to administer a hypo to Yareena.
TASHA
We're too late; she's growing
cold.
BEVERLY
Sorry that clashes with my
instructions...
The hypo administered, Beverly begins monitoring Yareena
on the medical tricorder.
81 CLOSE ON YAREENA
Not a pretty angle since she indeed looks dead.
82 CLOSE ON TASHA
Horror stricken at what she has done.
82 CONTINUED:
TASHA
On no, no...
83 INT. CENTERPLACE - EMPHASIZING PICARD AND LUTAN
with Troi, Geordi and Hagon looking on. Still angry
spectators in b.g.
PICARD
Exactly what do you find unfair,
Lutan? They fought to the death;
you saw the final blow; you know
the effects of your poison...
LUTAN
But what of your Lieutenant Yar?
She is to become my First One now.
PICARD
I certainly won't stop her -- if
she cares to claim that honor.
Lutan looks closely at Picard, beginning to realize that
Tasha may not want to be his First One. Hagon moves
in, comforting:
HAGON
But remember, you now have all
Yareena's lands and wealth, Lutan.
LUTAN
(with a wry smile at
Hagon)
At least, all has not been lost.
Over which we have HEARD the COMMUNICATOR SOUND, and
Picard touches his insignia.
PICARD
Picard here.
This amazes Lutan and Hagon too -- it is the first
they've known of this communication system.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
Since you've fulfilled your
agreement, Captain, can we now
beam the vaccine aboard?
LUTAN
Ah, yes... of course.
83 CONTINUED:
PICARD
No problem, Number One. Send down
someone from medical.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
And to complete our business here,
we are locked onto you.
PICARD
Five to beam up. Energize.
This startles Lutan and Hagon. They are in the act of
protesting as the TRANSPORTER EFFECT begins.
84 EXT. SPACE - ORBITAL ANGLE (OPTICAL)
The starship Enterprise.
RIKER (V.O.)
First Officer's log, Stardate
41235.6. I am returning the conn
to Captain Picard...
85 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT
Riker still at Command Center as:
RIKER (V.O.)
(continuing)
... as we begin loading the vaccine
supply aboard. Shortly, we hope
to signal "mission complete."
During which Picard, Lutan, Hagon and Troi ENTER from
a turbolift. Riker sees them, rises, and indicates in
the proper direction. Wesley makes himself small in
the bridge position he occupies.
RIKER
Welcome back, Captain, and you're
wanted in the lounge.
PICARD
(to his guests)
This way, gentlemen.
They MOVE ON as indicated. Troi remains on the
bridge.
86 INT. LOUNGE - ANGLE ON SIDE OF DOORS
as they OPEN, REVEALING Picard with Lutan and
Hagon who react in surprise at what they see inside.
87 WIDE ANGLE - EMPHASIZING LOUNGE OCCUPANTS
which are Tasha, Beverly... and Yareena, looking very
alive. On the table there is the fateful glavin,
medical tricorder and instruments. Accepting what he
sees, Lutan reacts angrily.
LUTAN
She is not dead! There was no
death combat; you have violated
our agreement. There will be no
treaty, no vaccine... !
PICARD
The challenge was carried out.
She died, Lutan.
LUTAN
There was no challenge! She is
alive.
Beverly picks up the glavin, moves to Lutan, holding
it very close to him.
BEVERLY
I am a physician and saw her die.
If you doubt this poison, why not
test it on yourself?
Lutan has flinched away from it. Picard moves in.
PICARD
Lutan, we can provide you with
the medical records to prove her
death and how Doctor Crusher
brought her back.
Yareena is enjoying this as she makes eye contact with
Tasha who nods approvingly.
YAREENA
And at the instant of death,
Lutan, a mating agreement
dissolves.
Yareena moves toward Lutan.
LUTAN
But this is witchcraft, Yareena.
To discard a mate in that
manner...
YAREENA
... is less painful than the one
you selected for me.
87 CONTINUED:
She reaches out and takes the ornate red-stone necklace
from his neck.
LUTAN
No, Yareena...
But he stands unresistingly as she turns with it, faces
Hagon.
YAREENA
Even as I battled, Hagon, I heard
you calling out for me.
She raises the necklace. Hagon nods.
HAGON
Be my First One, Yareena.
She places it around his neck.
YAREENA
All my land, all my goods, all
I have... is yours to rule.
A low SOB from Tasha, drawing startled looks from Picard.
TASHA
That's so beautiful.
(to Lutan)
And so sad for you. You've lost
everything.
LUTAN
I have my honor.
And it is true that Lutan still has his head held
proudly high. Tasha looks at him, then to Yareena.
TASHA
It's such a... a waste!
YAREENA
Do you want him?
Tasha is startled, looks to the Captain, then back.
TASHA
No, there would be...
complications.
87 CONTINUED: (2)
YAREENA
(to Lutan)
Then I will have you as my Number
Two.
(indicates)
Take your place accordingly.
Lutan moves to stand slightly behind Hagon.
HAGON
As you see, Captain, you may excel
in technology... but not in
civilized behavior.
88 EXT. SPACE - THE U.S.S. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
still in orbit of Ligon II.
89 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Fully manned... in fact, too fully. Picard ENTERS,
then senses something awry. He looks around, puzzled at
this. Then he looks toward the Ops station where
Wesley has been hoping to pass unnoticed.
PICARD
What the... !
(starts again)
Ah yes, Wesley.
RIKER
(overlap)
Wesley!
(quickly to Picard)
He'd been manning that station
for me. I forgot.
Wesley has come up out of the seat, looking apprehensive
as he stands somewhat at attention.
PICARD
Well!
(beat)
Thank you again for manning one
of our bridge stations. We'll
see you get another chance.
WESLEY
Yes sir!
Again, those words are an elixir which sends Wesley
happily on his way.
89 CONTINUED:
PICARD
What's the delay, Number One?
Why aren't we warping out of here?
RIKER
Set course for Styris IV, Warp
three.
GEORDI
Course laid in for Styris IV, sir.
RIKER
Engage!
90 EXT. SPACE - THE U.S.S. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
moving off from Ligon II, then WARP SPEED OPTICAL.
FADE OUT.
END ACT FIVE
THE END
1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
The great ship moving into orbit of planet Ligon.
PICARD (V.O.)
Captain's log, stardate 41235.25.
Our location planet Ligon II,
source of a rare vaccine needed
on Federation planet Styris IV.
Starfleet has instructed me...
2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE
Full complement of crew at stations, DATA at OPS, GEORDI
at CONN. RIKER and TROI are flanking PICARD.
PICARD (V.O.)
(continuing)
... to engage in a friendly visit
and open treaty negotiations to
acquire this medicinal substance.
GEORDI
Standard orbit, sir.
RIKER
Lieutenant Yar is calling from
Cargo Bay One, sir. Standing by
to beam Ligonian welcoming party
aboard.
PICARD
(rising)
On our way. You have the helm,
Mister Data.
Picard leads Riker and Troi into FORWARD Turbolift.
3 INT. TURBOLIFT
as Picard, Riker and Troi ENTER and the door HISSES
closed behind them.
PICARD
(continuing; toward
controls)
Cargo One.
(to Riker and Troi)
Should be an interesting
experience.
RIKER
Agreed. Not only are they closely
humanoid but their history has
remarkable similarities to ours.
TROI
But a highly structured society
and they're exceedingly proud.
4 INT. CARGO DECK (OPTICAL)
Picard, Riker and Troi ENTER. Tasha is waiting there
with a pair of SECURITY GUARDS -- one with a tricorder.
TASHA
They've insisted on using their
own transporter device, sir...
PICARD
(nods)
It's their way, Lieutenant. Do
they have our coordinates?
Tasha indicates cleared area ahead of them on the Cargo
Bay deck.
TASHA
They have, sir. Precisely. And
they're standing by for your
signal.
PICARD
This is Captain Picard of the
Starfleet vessel Enterprise.
Please...
(looks to Troi; she
nods)
... please do us the honor of
visiting our vessel.
After only a moment, a slightly different kind of
TRANSPORTER EFFECT materializes five people. There are
four extremely tall, elegant Black Guards who form a
square.
They are bare-waisted with metal collars -- each with a
centered jewel -- and each wears a hakama (starched,
baggy trousers pulled between the legs).
Each has at least one major scar, and each carries a
bo (a bojutsu fighting staff). Each wears as headgear
a red, braided rope in a circular crown. One carries
a rolled carpet. They face forward at attention, but
their eyes take in everything.
The fifth person materializing is HAGON, who carries a
dull metallic box. He bends down and kicks the carpet
so that it unrolls towards Picard.
Then, LUTAN beams into view. He stands a moment, tall,
magnificent and with flashing eyes. His dress is more
elegant, his jewel more resplendent. The Security Guard
with the tricorder scans the party quickly, then nods to
Tasha.
TASHA
(quietly to Picard)
Nothing concealed, sir.
Lutan steps forward. He looks about him for a moment.
LUTAN
I am Lutan.
Picard moves to greet him, raising both hands in the
customary Ligonian greeting to show one is not holding
a weapon. Lutan nods, satisfied, and smiles. Without
touching, he holds his hands up in a like manner.
PICARD
Captain Jean-Luc Picard. Welcome
aboard. These are my officers.
Second in command, Commander
William Riker; Ship's Counselor
Deanna Troi; my security officer,
Lieutenant Tasha Yar.
LUTAN
A woman? Your Chief of Security?
PICARD
Yes, Lutan: that is her expertise.
Lutan and Hagon exchange a near-amused look. Then Lutan
turns to Picard.
LUTAN
I am honored to meet your
officers.
(indicates Hagon)
And this is my Secondary, Hagon.
(indicates)
A sample of the vaccine.
Hagon steps forward with the metal box, extending it
to Picard. But Tasha steps forward to take it.
TASHA
My duty, Lutan.
Almost before the words are out of Tasha's mouth, Hagon
grabs for the box.
TASHA
(continuing)
Sorry, I am required to inspect...
HAGON
Aside, little one...
Hagon whirls toward Picard forcing Picard to step back
to avoid contact, but Tasha reacts protecting her
Captain, with it ending in Hagon being flipped onto his
back. Lutan's guards step forward menacingly but are
stopped by a gesture from Lutan. Hagon looks up from
his prone position, more puzzled than anything else.
HAGON
(continuing)
This... this is a woman?
LUTAN
(inspecting Tasha)
How interesting!
(then, to Picard)
May we prove as surprising to you.
FADE OUT.
ACT ONE
FADE IN:
5 INT. CARGO DECK - FULL SHOT
Same principals in approximately the same positions as
last SCENE.
TROI
(low voice)
If I may suggest, sir...
She indicates for the Enterprise people to move back
and give Lutan and his people room and also time to
recover. In just above a whisper:
TROI
(continuing)
No apology. In their view, it
would weaken us.
6 EMPHASIZING LUTAN
Unlike Hagon and the Guards, he's beginning to enjoy
this as Riker picks up the container Hagon had been
holding, examines it and extends it to Picard.
RIKER
Nothing concealed, Captain.
(extends it)
Do you care to accept it?
HAGON
Yes, yes, please do.
LUTAN
(to Tasha)
Unless you care to examine it
further.
7 CLOSER GROUP SHOT
Picard seeing it is time to turn on the charm.
PICARD
Absolutely not. This vaccine
sample is a gift of life and we
are honored at receiving it.
(indicates way into
vessel)
Will you do us the honor of
letting us entertain you now?
LUTAN
(nodding)
You may prepare it. We will join
you shortly.
With nothing else to do, the Enterprise group LEAVES the
immediate area. They're not fools -- security people
remain in sight. Lutan and Hagon move closer together,
speak in low tones.
HAGON
I ask forgiveness....
LUTAN
(cuts him off)
They are strange alien things.
You bear no fault...
HAGON
But the female...
LUTAN
May be exactly what I've needed.
8 INT. LOUNGE - FULL SHOT
Data, BEVERLY and Troi are seen ENTERING, Data carrying
a magnificent bronze horse. Picard stands next to
Lutan.
PICARD
Lutan, we're aware of many of your
planet's achievements, and its
unique similarity to an ancient
Earth culture, which we all
admire. On behalf of the
Federation, therefore, I am proud
to present to you this token of
gratitude and friendship. From
China's Sung Dynasty, Fourteenth
Century.
DATA
(to Picard)
Thirteenth Century, sir.
PICARD
Indeed?
LUTAN
(accepting and admiring
it)
It is a most thoughtful gift.
We are grateful.
Lutan hands the horse to Hagon. Then, while watching
Tasha with interest:
LUTAN
(continuing)
We from Ligon have always been
apprehensive about strangers.
We are not as technologically
advanced as you; yet we possess
something you do not -- a vaccine
which has been found to be an
effective antidote to your deadly
Anchilles fever. If your conduct
toward us is worthy -- if you
respect our customs -- and if we
see this respect -- we will
become friends. Then, we will
make the vaccine available to all
who need it.
Everyone APPLAUDS. Lutan is proud and dignified. He
sweeps the gathering with his eyes, which hold on Tasha.
9 CLOSE SHOT - TASHA
She meets his gaze with confidence.
10 BACK TO FULL SHOT
The room quiets down as Picard rises.
PICARD
If you require respect from us,
I'm certain you will see it.
LUTAN
Surrounded by such friendship,
I have no need of my guards.
(to guards)
I will return shortly. Prepare
to transport me then.
The Guards signal obedience, begin EXITING. Picard and
the others are puzzled by this.
PICARD
If there is something else, any
final courtesy...
LUTAN
Is it possible to see one of your
wondrous holodecks? We have heard
how they are used to train your
officers.
Picard exchanges a quick, concerned look with Riker and
Troi.
PICARD
And used for many other things
too.
(turning)
Commander Riker, perhaps you and
Counselor Troi can demonstrate.
LUTAN
Is it possible for Lieutenant Yar
to do so Captain? Some
demonstration of defense training?
RIKER
We've noticed you are intrigued
by her having security
responsibilities. But such things
are not at all unusual with us.
HAGON
With us, it is the duty of women
only to own the land, and the duty
of men to protect and rule it.
TROI
(amused)
Much the same has happened in
human history too.
Picard smiles, then turns to Tasha questioningly. She
nods.
TASHA
I'd like to do it, sir.
(to Lutan)
As a sign of respect, perhaps.
PICARD
(nods agreement)
Very well.
Tasha beckons to Lutan and Hagon.
TASHA
This way, please.
A couple of Enterprise Security Guards follow.
11 INT. HOLODECK - FULL SHOT - OPTICAL (SPLIT SCREEN)
Tasha, followed by Lutan and Hagon, plus the two
security team members, who stay in the b.g. Tasha moves
to the wall controls. She punches in some commands,
reaches for an aikido jacket from a peg, then walks to
a bare area. She gives a CODED COMMAND.
TASHA
(continuing)
Aikido. One.
An Aikido Opponent MATERIALIZES (DISSOLVES IN) ON A MAT.
The IMAGE remains rigid, immobile. The visitors are
much impressed.
TASHA
(continuing; amicably)
It won't move until my actions
activate it.
12 CLOSER ON GROUP
Lutan stepping in to examine the Aikido Opponent,
amazed.
LUTAN
You can create people? Without
a soul?
TASHA
It's not a real person, Lutan.
It has no life. Everything it
does is controlled by computer.
She moves close to the image.
TASHA
(continuing; to the
image)
Who am I? Do you hear me?
The image doesn't move. But when Tasha suddenly feints,
the image instantly blocks the blow.
TASHA
(continuing)
But it will feel real when it hits
you.
She crouches and the IMAGE crouches, and they begin to
fight. After rapid and savage exchange, she throws the
IMAGE.
13 EMPHASIZING LUTAN
His eyes begin to glow as he evaluates what he sees,
watching with growing interest.
HAGON
A force like that cannot possibly
come from an image, Lutan.
LUTAN
Then you will show me, Hagon.
Hagon hesitates, but he has his order. He moves to the
mat as Tasha steps aside.
14 ACTION ANGLE
Hagon crouches, the image crouches. Hagon deftly makes
two feints, and then a move and is promptly dumped hard.
There's no doubt about the pain he feels.
HAGON
(trying to breathe)
Oh. . . . Oh...
LUTAN
(to Tasha)
Thank you, Lieutenant. How very
enlightening.
15 CLOSER ANGLE (OPTICAL)
Behind Tasha the IMAGE RISES and stands, remaining
quiet.
TASHA
(into the air)
Aikido, vanish.
The IMAGE DISSOLVES. Tasha goes to the panel, shuts
down the controls, takes a towel from the wall, wipes
off, and removes her jacket.
TASHA
(continuing)
I could create two -- even three,
but one is really enough. As you
fight with it, it learns, and
before long it knows exactly how
to defeat you.
LUTAN
(a smile)
Even the extraordinary Lieutenant
Yar?
TASHA
(also a smile)
It forces us to keep improving.
Lutan's eyes are glowing as he nods.
LUTAN
Your skill impresses me. I like
you.
Lutan shows a definite reaction to Tasha, and she
reacts to him similarly. Picard notices both
reactions.
16 INT. CARGO DECK - FULL SHOT (OPTICAL)
Our Enterprise participants are all present with Lutan
and Hagon. Good-byes are being exchanged.
LUTAN
(continuing)
Farewell, my new friends of the
noble Enterprise.
PICARD
Understanding has made friends
of many different people. We've
had a good beginning, Lutan.
LUTAN
May I also extend a personal
farewell to Lieutenant Yar?
Picard nods. Tasha moves forward. Lutan extends his
hand to her.
LUTAN
In your Federation terms.
Tasha takes his hand and shakes it. Lutan puts an arm
around her as if to hug her. Releasing his first hand,
but still holding her, he reaches up and touches the
jewel at the center of his necklace. In an instant
their images SHIMMER, and they are gone.
PICARD
Picard to bridge. Red alert!
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT ONE
ACT TWO
FADE IN:
17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
The KLAXON is sounding. Turbolift opens and Riker
ENTERS bridge immediately, crossing to man the
Security Station.
RIKER
Shields up; activate photon
torpedoes!
Picard and Troi have come out of the turbolift right
after him, CROSSING to their own positions.
PICARD
What com contact have we had with
them?
Data makes a move at his panel, the KLAXON ceases.
DATA
With their orbital control
station, sir.
PICARD
(reaches his position)
Make contact there and on all
hailing frequencies.
(touches control panel)
Enterprise to Lutan and Ligonian
government. You have committed
an unfriendly act. You will reply
immediately.
RIKER
Photon torpedoes ready, Captain.
PICARD
Set for a display blast, a
thousand meters short of planet
surface. Fire!
RIKER
Display blast away!
18 EXT. ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL)
as a spread of photon torpedoes are sent downward
toward the planet below.
18A ANGLE DOWN TOWARD PLANET (OPTICAL)
as the torpedo spread travels down toward the planet
surface, then detonates in a SPECTACULAR DISPLAY.
19 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
as all wait for some communication from the planet.
RIKER
(to Geordi)
Do we know the source of their
transporter beam?
GEORDI
Our own transporter people tried
to trace it, sir, but without
effect.
DATA
It reads similar to Starfleet's
early efforts but uses the
Heglenian shift to convert matter
and energy in different...
(stops; seeing Picard's
expression)
... which is actually not
important at this time.
PICARD
(touching panel com)
This is Captain Picard of the
Enterprise with a message to Lutan
whom I have so far acknowledged
as a friend. But you have now
committed what our laws regard
as an attack upon us, Lutan. And
having visited us here, Lutan,
you must certainly understand the
power of our vessel. We have so
far fired only a warning burst
at you. We insist you reply to
this message.
They again wait. Finally Picard turns to Troi:
PICARD
(continuing)
Opinion, Counselor. Will they
injure Tasha?
TROI
I believe not, sir. In fact, they
seem mainly curious. But in the
case of Lutan I did feel other
needs.
RIKER
What kind of needs?
TROI
Some sexual attraction from all
the males. Lieutenant Yar is
physically very attractive. But
I felt something else in the case
of Lutan... something more like...
avarice or ambition.
All puzzle at this.
PICARD
Other comments?
Data turns to Picard.
DATA
If I may, sir... one of the things
about them in the briefing studies
was their respect for patience.
RIKER
(nods)
Strongly emphasized. And you can
see it in the precise, ritualistic
way they do things. I'm worried
about Lieutenant Yar too, sir,
but maybe we should sit and wait
them out.
Picard considers this, then nods. He turns to Troi and
Data:
PICARD
Analysis, the two of you.
Everything we know about them and
how these happenings fit into
that.
20 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL)
Planet Ligon II below.
PICARD (V.O.)
Stardate 41235.32. I am
concerned. Over a full day of
waiting with no response from...
21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT
Only Geordi on duty with a couple of upper-deck
Technicians. During the following, BEVERLY CRUSHER will
ENTER Bridge and CROSS toward the Captain's Ready Room.
WE SEE WESLEY too; he waits in the Turbolift cab.
PICARD (V.O.)
(continuing)
... Lutan. We are now testing
whether they are aware of our
sensors probing them. So far,
we believe we have pinpointed
Lutan's government compound.
22 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM
Beverly ENTERS, joins Picard waiting inside. She's
very upset.
BEVERLY
The vaccine, sir...
PICARD
(rises)
Yes, Doctor?
BEVERLY
The vaccine...
(stops; shudders)
I'm a... physician; I've seen death.
But not on the scale this could
mean.
PICARD
Meanwhile, you were testing
whether we can replicate the
vaccine...
BEVERLY
And we can't! Their sample
works fine when used as an
injection, but it becomes unstable
when we try to replicate it. You
must get vaccine from the planet,
Captain. As much as you can.
Immediately!
PICARD
I'm aware of that, Doctor.
BEVERLY
You've never had to watch a
patient die from this disease.
PICARD
That's true. But I've seen my
share of death.
BEVERLY
Damn!
(weak smile; shakes her
head)
Where are the calluses we doctors
are supposed to grow over our
feelings?
PICARD
Perhaps the good ones never get
them.
Beverly moves toward the exit, then stops and turns,
eyes him for a long moment.
PICARD
(continuing; hopeful)
Yes, Doctor?
BEVERLY
(hesitates; then)
May I speak about my son Wesley?
PICARD
(startled)
What?
(recovers)
Well, yes. Yes, of course.
BEVERLY
He's so interested in starship
operations. And...
(smiles)
... speaking as a mother, of
course, he seems quite
knowledgeable. He’s talked about
nothing but the ship and Spider-Man
non-stop…needless to say I’d rather encourage
one obsession over the other…
PICARD
Well, yes...I would as well, speaking as a
Captain…
BEVERLY
(indicates;
interrupting)
He's on the turbolift. You'll
remember you ordered him to stay
off the bridge.
The whole subject upsets Picard but he feels trapped
now. And Beverly is remarkably lovely. He finally
motions for her to follow him toward the bridge.
23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE
Picard ENTERS from the Ready Room and CROSSES toward
his position. Beverly stays half concealed in the
Ready Room entry. In the b.g. at the turbolift, WE'LL
SEE Wesley quickly flatten himself almost out of sight.
But Picard keeps looking in that direction and this
fact finally forces Wesley SOMEWHAT INTO SIGHT.
24 ANGLE ON TURBOLIFT
Wesley finally comes more fully INTO VIEW and meets
Picard's eyes.
WESLEY
(weakly)
I haven't stepped one foot on your
bridge, Captain...
25 WIDER ANGLE
As the other turbolift arrives, from which Riker,
Data, and Troi ENTER to see Picard in an apparent
confrontation with Wesley. Riker moves in first,
speaking rapidly.
RIKER
It's all right, sir, I'll see he
leaves immediately...
WE SEE Picard throw a fast glance toward the Ready Room
where Beverly HAS APPEARED in the doorway.
PICARD
No.
25 CONTINUED:
RIKER
(halts)
No?
PICARD
(to Wesley)
Why don't you sit at Ops? Next
to Lieutenant La Forge.
WESLEY
Sir?
GEORDI
Sir?
PICARD
Is the whole ship deaf?!
(indicates)
Sit down over there, young man!
(beat)
Temporarily.
26 ANGLE ON WESLEY
CROSSING to sit next to Geordi, eyeing the Bridge, the
vessel's controls. Heaven!
27 BACK TO SHOT
TROI
Captain, we have more information
from the briefing studies on
Ligon...
PICARD
Excuse me.
(calls)
Doctor Crusher, some of this may
interest you.
28 ANOTHER ANGLE
to include Beverly STEPPING INTO VIEW, CROSSING to join
the group at the command position. Except for Troi,
all feel a moment of discomfort with Beverly appearing
from the Ready Room and Wesley at the Ops position.
28 CONTINUED:
PICARD
(continuing)
Proceed with your analysis.
DATA
It is a highly structured society
in which people live by strict
codes of honor. For example, what
Lutan has done is similar to what
certain American Indians once did,
called "counting coup." That's
from an obscure language called
French --
PICARD
A language which for centuries
on Earth represented civilization,
Mister Data.
DATA
Indeed?
RIKER
I suggest you drop it, Mister
Data.
A puzzled Data shrugs, goes on.
DATA
Yes sir. Counting coup could be
as simple as touching an enemy
with a stick in battle, or taking
something from him and escaping.
It was considered extremely
heroic.
RIKER
And under these circumstances
Lutan considers himself heroic,
risking literally everything in
the face of our superior power.
TROI
And it fits Lutan's personality
profile as well. He has an
abnormally high need for
achievement -- I've sensed it in
him, very strongly.
Picard nods.
28 CONTINUED: (2)
TROI
(continuing)
We should establish clearly also,
that Lutan is dangerous. Self
image for him is a function of
how much he THINKS he's achieved.
Those who set their standards too
high can kill to meet them.
BEVERLY
Why Tasha?
TROI
As a Starfleet security officer,
she may have represented his
riskiest prize.
29 ANGLE EMPHASIZING DATA
responding to a signal panel, then:
DATA
(to Picard)
Transmission from the planet
surface, sir... Main viewer on.
30 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL)
where an image of Lutan replaces the orbit planet SHOT.
PICARD
Yes, Lutan? What do you wish?
Lutan is squinting, his screen apparently without
Picard's image there.
LUTAN
You will display your image,
please.
PICARD
What is required is an image of
Lieutenant Yar, well and...
LUTAN
(interrupting)
Are you making demands, Captain?
TROI
Sir...
She motions; Picard cuts off his transmission.
TROI
(continuing)
According to the Ligon Code of
Honor, Lutan has done what he set
out to do -- achieve recognition
for being daring and bold.
RIKER
We've studied this in some depth
now, sir. The proper thing for
you to do now is to ask to get
Tasha back.
PICARD
(astonished)
Ask for her?
DATA
Politely, Captain.
PICARD
(touches com button)
And now, Lutan...
(swallows irritation)
You have boldly taken the
lieutenant from us and I ask that
you... now please return her.
LUTAN
Then come visit us, Captain, and
we will return her to you.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT TWO
ACT THREE
FADE IN:
31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING RIKER
as he activates his panel com. Troi watches,
expressionless as:
RIKER
First Officer to Transporter
Chief...
TROI
(interrupts)
Forgive me but can you delay
calling him?
DATA
(nods agreement)
Please. We must discuss the away
party.
PICARD
Am I included?
32 ANGLE ON WESLEY
at Ops position but distracted by what is going on.
DATA (O.S.)
It concerns you directly, Captain.
BEVERLY (O.S.)
Wesley. It's time we left.
33 WIDER ANGLE - TO INCLUDE BEVERLY
moving to the turbolift which she is indicating to
Wesley. He stands, disappointed that it's over. Picard
sees this.
PICARD
Wesley... thanks for taking a turn
at the controls.
WESLEY
Yes sir.
That has changed everything. A buoyant Wesley leaves
the bridge with his mother.
33 CONTINUED:
TROI
Commander....
RIKER
"Commander?" That's quite
formal...
TROI
So is this request, sir. We
believe it would be preferable
if the captain led this away
party.
DATA
Agreed, sir. Their customs
concerning guests make it much
preferable.
RIKER
(to Picard)
And I'm very much against it.
Lutan is clearly a liar, and
devious. Counselor Troi has
admitted she believes him capable
of killing. It is my duty to keep
the captain out of danger, sir.
DATA
Except that Ligonian custom makes
it clear that a visiting leader
becomes an honored guest.
(indicates)
Not us, not second in command...
him.
TROI
And the custom requires Lutan to
die rather than violate that.
Picard says nothing, waits for Riker to absorb all this.
Then:
RIKER
Yes... it does sound reasonable
put that way.
(to Picard)
I warn you, Captain... if you get
hurt, I'll put you on report!
This gets smiles from everyone.
34 EXT. LUTAN'S CENTERPLACE ON LIGON - ESTABLISHING
(OPTICAL)
This enclosed, sanded area, walled in black, has an
ascetic, Zen-garden feeling with a pebbled center
enclosing a small, off-center fountain. A single,
simple, brilliant banner identifies this an important
place, and whatever design elements are visible reveal
an interest in the abstract, perhaps a Mondrian-ish
feeling. Two sentries are posted beside a doorway.
Picard and Troi BEAM INTO SHOT. Lutan and Hagon come
from inside the doorway and exchange the "empty hands"
ritual greeting with Picard.
LUTAN
Welcome to my Centerplace, Captain
Picard. Consider yourselves my
honored guests.
YAREENA (O.S.)
Every hospitality will be accorded
you.
ADJUST ANGLE to include YAREENA, who has just joined
them. She is petite by Ligonian standards and quite
radiant, a woman of visible nobility and keen
intelligence. Her only flaw being her passionate,
unreasoning love for Lutan.
LUTAN
This is my First One, Yareena.
PICARD
Lutan is a fortunate man.
She smiles graciously, but remains a bit behind him,
according to custom.
PICARD
(continuing)
You've met Counselor Troi.
LUTAN
Yes.
(to Picard)
As on your vessel, you have only
to name whatever courtesy we can
provide.
PICARD
Then, sir... the courtesy of
seeing Lieutenant Yar.
LUTAN
Lieutenant Yar will be returned
to you tonight at a banquet I have
arranged in your honor.
PICARD
I would like to see her now.
LUTAN
(thinks; then, to a
sentry)
Bring Lieutenant Yar.
(to Picard)
I find it odd, Captain, that a
man of your experience has such
difficulty in understanding
ordinary politeness.
PICARD
Such as saying "please" when
abducting someone?
LUTAN
The expression "please" is used
only when requesting the person
back.
PICARD
Yours is a different world.
LUTAN
With clear and simple ways deeply
rooted in our culture. If you
are willing to ask for Lieutenant
Yar's release tonight in front
of all, honor will be satisfied.
TROI
(to Picard)
One can see the importance of
"honor" here.
LUTAN
Honor is everything.
Picard and Troi exchange looks.
HAGON
There will be gifts for each of
you, to absolve the abduction.
Tasha is brought to the doorway between four guards,
with every sign she would break free at the slightest
opportunity. One of the guards limps, a leg bandaged.
When Tasha sees Picard she calms down.
PICARD
Lieutenant, have you been treated
well?
TASHA
Fine, Captain...
(indicates bandaged
guard; smiles)
... but they're showing some signs
of wear.
YAREENA
There isn't any need to be
concerned, Captain. She's being
well cared for.
Picard looks Tasha over, then turns to Lutan.
PICARD
My ship's company and I are
certain of your gentle wisdom in
that.
Lutan hesitates, takes another look at Picard. Then:
LUTAN
I thought for a moment I heard
a threat implied.
(shrugs)
But that would be foolishness.
PICARD
Something to be carefully avoided
I agree.
LUTAN
The festivities for her return
to you are in preparation. Shall
we retire until then?
Lutan gestures to the guards, who move to take Tasha
OFF, without resistance. CAMERA PUSHES IN on Picard as
he replies and considers what is ahead.
PICARD
Until tonight, Lutan.
35 EXT. CENTERPLACE - ESTABLISHING - NIGHT
Under a canopy, a juggler performs. Guests sit on floor
mats or cushions. All carry hand-held, delicately
carved ivory-like sticks which they tap together to
signal applause or approval. Tables are low and food is
plentiful. ESTABLISH Lutan and Yareena sitting on a
slightly raised dais, with Hagon next to him on floor
level, and Lutan's Supporters close around them. The
juggler drops something and suddenly stops. He has
committed an act of dishonor.
36 ANGLE ON PICARD AND TROI
Picard and Troi scan the room, hoping to see Tasha. A
sudden SCREAM from the direction where the juggler had
performed.
37 FULL SHOT
Picard and Troi whirl to look in that direction but
their line of sight is quickly blocked by gift bearers
who APPEAR, with Ligonian silks, works of precious
metal, and fine large gems. Picard is troubled by what
may have happened to the juggler but is distracted by
the gift bearers making presentations. Then the room
falls SILENT.
LUTAN
We present you gifts!
38 CLOSER SHOT
as Tasha is escorted in to approving IVORY-TAPPING
sounds from the Ligonians who face Lutan. Tasha is
seated next to Lutan and Yareena on an empty cushion.
She smiles at Picard and Troi. At FULL SILENCE Lutan
turns and fixes his gaze on Picard. The moment has
arrived. Picard rises and faces Lutan with great
dignity.
PICARD
Lutan, you have granted us
hospitality and the safety of your
Centerplace. The gifts you give
us are rare and precious. We
thank you. In accordance with
the customs of your ancestors,
which I honor and respect, I am
here in peace to ask for the
return of Lieutenant Yar.
The Guests CHIME WILDLY now, nodding in enthusiastic
approval. Yareena is especially proud and pleased.
CAMERA TO LUTAN, who smiles and rises, CAMERA MOVING
SLOWLY BACK.
LUTAN
Well spoken. There are some among
my equals in this gathering who
were wary of my approaching the
Federation. I am proud to have
taken this first step towards a
treaty -- and proud we have
something of great value to offer
you -- a priceless life-giving
vaccine.
(beat)
The abduction I have done
according to our custom, for all
to see.
(great applause)
Your conduct in this matter has
been beyond exemplary, Captain
Picard --
(glances at Tasha)
-- but now that the moment has
come, I find I cannot part with
her.
A ripple of astonishment flows through the crowd in the
room. Picard takes a step forward. Tension.
PICARD
You speak of a code of honor...
but what you are now saying is
called under our customs... an
act of war.
LUTAN
No, no, Captain! You do not
understand.
PICARD
Correct! I am now beyond
understanding!
LUTAN
This is not an act of war, but
of love. I want Lieutenant Yar
to become my First One.
There is general astonishment. Yareena is as shocked
and outraged as Picard and Troi. Hagon is also
disturbed. Yareena jumps to her feet.
YAREENA
I challenge your right of
supercedence!
The Guests in the room are stunned.
HAGON
(at Yareena)
No woman has challenged
supercedence for over two-hundred
years!
YAREENA
The right is mine -- and I will
have it!
(then to Tasha, furious)
Natasha Yar -- I challenge you!
A struggle to the death!
ZOOM IN and PAN to include QUICK REACTION SHOTS from
Tasha and Troi. Then, ZOOM BACK as Picard jumps to his
feet.
PICARD
(strongly)
NO! The challenge is
unequivocally refused!
There is a stunned SILENCE. Lutan rises to his feet,
eyes blazing.
LUTAN
Then you shall have no treaty --
no vaccine -- and no Lieutenant
Yar!
39 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
It maintains orbit around Ligon.
RIKER (V.O.)
Ship's log, First Officer Riker
reporting. We have been informed
of the challenge to Lieutenant
Yar...
40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FEATURING SCIENCE AND TACTICAL
Riker tours the stations checking readouts, while
continuing his log. A FULL CREW is on station.
RIKER
(continuing)
... and are maintaining combat
readiness round-the-clock. We
are probing Lutan's compound
deeply with our sensors now, still
unnoticed.
41 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT
Tasha, doing exercises, straightens up as Picard and
Troi ENTER SHOT. During the following scene Troi does
nothing except listen intently. A Ligon Guard patrols.
TASHA
Captain. Deanna.
PICARD
Did you have any idea, Lieutenant,
that Lutan would suddenly announce
he wanted you for his First One?
What do you know of this?
TASHA
Nothing, sir.
TROI
(as if to herself)
But it was a thrill. Lutan is
such... such a basic male image
and having him say he wants you...
TASHA
(nods)
Yes, of course it made me feel
good...
Then she becomes aware that Picard is watching this
closely. She turns on Troi:
TASHA
(continuing)
Troi! I'm your friend and you
tricked me!
TROI
Only so you'll think about it
completely and clearly.
41 CONTINUED:
PICARD
(to Tasha)
We're all being manipulated,
Lieutenant, and most of all
myself.
TROI
(scrutinizing Picard)
How simple all this would be
without the Prime Directive.
PICARD
(nods; half-amused)
That thought has passed through
my mind, Counselor.
42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON RIKER
at the command position, looking toward his panel
communications. The turbolift doors open, Beverly
HURRIES onto the bridge.
RIKER
What's this message from Starbase
Fourteen?
43 WIDER ANGLE
Beverly hurries to indicate Riker's viewer.
BEVERLY
It's showing infection rates,
percentage illness increases...
(looks up)
The plague on Styris IV has
flared up out of control.
Riker takes another moment to study the information
received.
RIKER
Oh, no!
43 CONTINUED:
GEORDI
(studying his own
viewer)
They're estimating deaths in the
millions, sir.
RIKER
(hits com control)
Captain Picard, come in.
44 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT
The lighting in the room low, Troi trying to nap but
with Tasha disturbing this.
TASHA
I know I could win. Not that I'd
take her life, of course, but I'd
be glad to embarrass her. The
idea of accusing me...
Interrupted by Picard ENTERING with guards still in
b.g. Troi is immediately alert at the captain's
presence.
TROI
The plague?
PICARD
If anything, worse than we heard.
TASHA
Which means they desperately need
the vaccine, sir. And I know
I can win this challenge...
PICARD
You do not have to prove anything
here, Lieutenant.
TROI
But the vaccine is important in
this case, sir... ?
PICARD
Counselor, I would consider you
the last person to argue for
Lieutenant Yar to accept that
challenge.
44 CONTINUED:
TROI
Betazoid blood is also practical,
Captain.
(indicates Tasha)
The odds are very good she'd
defeat Lutan's wife easily and
you would win all the bargaining
points you need.
PICARD
"The odds are... ?"
TROI
As you have pointed out yourself,
we are all at risk every day of
every mission.
Picard gives her a searching look, glancing at
Tasha.
PICARD
I'll want some explanations from
Lutan.
TROI
But why not let him volunteer
them, Captain? His needs for
approval are immense. I'm sure
if you found something you liked
about him, he'd be anxious to
agree with it.
TASHA
(laughs)
Yes, he would indeed. He's almost
crippled with needs, the poor
handsome dear.
Picard considers this, then EXITS.
45 INT. CENTERPLACE BANQUET AREA - NIGHT
Lutan and Hagon are still in the empty Banquet Hall,
talking and finishing a drink. Picard ENTERS.
PICARD
I should tell you I do admire the
hospitality you offer here, Lutan.
A pity you began by abducting my
security officer.
45 CONTINUED:
LUTAN
I am in the grip of forces you
do not understand.
PICARD
(hesitates; nods)
Some of it I do understand. She
is a rather lovely female...
LUTAN
You surprise me, Captain. What
do you know of needs and feelings?
PICARD
Nothing.
(pretends to hesitate;
smiles)
Well, almost nothing in my
position of ship's captain.
HAGON
(chuckles)
Aha, I see.
PICARD
(smiles now)
But it puzzles me; if you feel that
way about Tasha, why have you
challenged her to a fight to the
death?
LUTAN
Not I, Yareena! I am merely a
spectator.
PICARD
But you are also a man of great
importance and wealth.
HAGON
Great importance, perhaps...
Lutan has tried to stop what Hagon has said, but moves
too slowly. Picard then chuckles.
PICARD
Aha, I see. Then you too
understand the proper value of
women?
LUTAN
We understand they are highly
pleasant things... but after all,
unimportant, except for the land
they own.
PICARD
You're a truly clever person,
Lutan. You have nothing to lose
either way the challenge goes.
46 CLOSER TWO SHOT
as Lutan smiles.
LUTAN
A code of honor, Captain, protects
one like a magic cloak.
PICARD
(a long pause; then)
I will order Lieutenant Yar to
fight.
(rises)
And may your cloak bring you all
you deserve, Lutan.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT THREE
ACT FOUR
FADE IN:
47 INT. ENTERPRISE - GEORDI'S QUARTERS
Geordi is standing alone in his room, his glasses on
a table. Without his VISOR his eyes are dead grey.
He holds a glowing 2-inch blue cube in his hand which
he moves up, down and across his face an inch or so away
from the skin. He is shaving. There is a CHIME from
his door.
GEORDI
Come in.
Data ENTERS, stops short as he sees the razor Geordi
is using.
DATA
Why that razor, my friend? Why
not the one I adjusted into
perfect efficiency?
GEORDI
Shaving is a human art form, Data.
Technological perfection can shave
too close.
DATA
Puzzling. How can anything be
too efficient?
GEORDI
Tens of thousands of things. Maybe
hundreds.
DATA
(puzzles over it; then)
We always go back to the human
equation.
GEORDI
Exactly. Have you kept working
on it?
DATA
Constantly, my friend.
(MORE)
DATA (Cont'd)
(nods)
Particularly human humor. For
example, a man goes to a store
to buy some kidneys. He says to
the shopkeeper, "I'd like a pound
of kiddillies, please." The
shopkeeper says to him, "You mean
kidneys, don't you?" The man
says, "I said kiddillies, diddle
I?"
Long silence.
GEORDI
It's too old. And you didn't tell
it very well.
DATA
... How do you know when
something's funny?
GEORDI
It's not explainable. You just
do.
DATA
Perhaps it is you, Geordi.
Includling the kiddillies, I've
learned six hundred sixty-two
jokes, and you haven't...
Data stops, realizing Geordi is laughing.
GEORDI
(still chuckling)
"Includling the kiddillies!" Now
that's funny.
DATA
It was not meant as a joke!
The tongue slipped!
Geordi CHUCKLES even more at this. He puts away his
razor, begins to fit his VISOR in place.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
Riker to Commander Data,
Lieutenant La Forge. Report to
the Transporter Room for away
party duty.
Both men move out quickly.
48 INT. WEAPONS ROOM ON LIGON - DAY (OPTICAL)
Picard and Troi are examining weapons exhibited in the
room. Unusual looking pikes, daggers, spiked gloves,
unusual looking blast guns, nets, scythes, all bizarre
and unfamiliar types.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
First officer to captain. Ready
with the away personnel.
PICARD
(touches insignia)
Lock in on this location.
TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE
Transporter locked in, sir.
PICARD
Energize!
A short delay, then Data and Geordi BEAM IN. Data
carries a large tricorder.
PICARD
(continuing)
You've both seen the message about
the plague?
GEORDI
(nods)
And how badly the vaccine is
needed. Yes sir.
PICARD
We need to know as much as
possible about Ligonian arms and
armaments. Data, especially
important will be an analysis of
their combat capabilities.
Geordi, concentrate on their
cutting edges where applicable,
durability, composition,
weaknesses of material.
GEORDI
Aye, sir.
DATA
From any particular point of view,
sir?
TROI
From the perspective of Lieutenant
Yar's using them in combat with
Lutan's wife.
Geordi is stunned; Data is curious.
GEORDI
Are you...
(begins again)
You, you're serious, I can see
that.
DATA
Most interesting.
(to Geordi)
Could this be human joke number
six hundred sixty-three?
GEORDI
Negative, Data! It's a captain's
order!
DATA
Which makes it important to
know...
(indicates)
... which of these weapons are to
be used.
PICARD
That fact isn't known until the
combat begins.
Data and Geordi turn to the weapons to begin examining
them. Picard turns toward the exit with Troi, then
stops and turns back to Data.
PICARD
(continuing)
You're right, Data. It does sound
like a joke. With the power of
the Enterprise, we could overwhelm
this place easily. Take what we
want.
DATA
I may not understand human humor,
sir, but I am a Starfleet Academy
graduate.
PICARD
Which means, of course...
DATA
... understanding the Prime
Directive, sir.
PICARD
Which is, unfortunately, what this
is about. By our standards, the
customs here and code of honor
are the same kind of pompous,
strutting charades that endangered
our own species a few centuries
ago. We evolved out of it because
no one else imposed their own...
(stops; shakes head
ruefully)
Sorry, that became a speech.
TROI
You're the captain, sir. You're
entitled...
PICARD
(smiles)
Mm, not entitled to ramble on about something everyone knows.
Carry on.
The others have returned his smile as he and Troi EXIT.
49 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
in orbit around Ligon.
RIKER (V.O.)
Ship's log, Commander William
Riker reporting. Stardate
41235.4.
50 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Riker walks past the rear readouts, taking a moment to
study them.
RIKER (V.O.)
(continuing)
Continuing our appraisal of
Ligonian technology. The Captain
has made it clear...
... he wants Lieutenant Yar beamed
immediately to safety if her life
should become endangered... and
I fervently hope the rules of that
contest make it possible.
RIKER
Riker to Transporter Room. Do you
have our people on the sensors yet?
TRANSPORTER CHIEF (V.O.)
Their general area, sir. Visual on
screen now.
Riker presses a button on a nearby console and looks.
51 OMITTED
52 CLOSE ON COMPUTER SCREEN (INSERT) (OPTICAL)
The screen lists every name in the away party.
Alongside each name triangulation coordinates APPEAR.
They change as those who move change location.
TRANSPORTER CHIEF (V.O.)
(continuing)
As you see, we're still doing some
fine tuning.
53 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT
Tasha is alone as Yareena ENTERS.
YAREENA
I agreed to this meeting, but I
see no point to it. You have
accepted the challenge; there is
nothing further to say.
TASHA
I think you should know that there
is no physical training anywhere
that matches Starfleet, especially
its security people.
YAREENA
And you should know that even
though these contests are rare,
we have a tradition of making
ourselves capable of them.
TASHA
Yareena, my acceptance had nothing
to do with Lutan.
YAREENA
It has everything to do with
Lutan. Lutan wants you to be his
First One.
TASHA
Impossible, Yareena. I am a career
Starfleet officer...
YAREENA
How could you not love him? Every
woman loves him!
TASHA
Yareena, I fight for the
vaccine... That's the truth.
YAREENA
The truth is I will kill you if
I can. And believe me, I can.
There is nothing else to say.
TASHA
In my world it's a greater honor
to refuse to ...
YAREENA
(interrupting)
You are on our world!
Yareena whirls, EXITS.
54 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - NIGHT
The room is similar to Tasha's, but less elegant and
much smaller. Picard paces.
TROI
Captain, I'm your counselor. You
brought me with you to Ligon to
be of help.
PICARD
Then help me, please. What is
a way out of this?
TROI
With the vaccine?
(shakes head)
None. Not under the rules we
believe in.
There is a KNOCK. A Guard opens the door to admit Data
and Geordi.
GEORDI
The weapons in that room are
surprisingly durable and
flexible... and deadly.
DATA
And light, as if they're made for
women to use.
GEORDI
Some of them still have traces
of blood -- and poison.
PICARD
(reacting)
Poison?
GEORDI
Alkaloid base. Deadly.
DATA
But we found no indication it is
invariably used, sir. Or ever,
in contests like this.
PICARD
A theory, Data. What would be
the best defense against weapons
like these?
DATA
Undiminished attack because of
the possibility of poison, sir.
PICARD
What about those lengths of metal
in the yard outside?
DATA
Uncertain, sir. However, joined
together they would make a
rectangle or square enclosing one
hundred twenty-one square meters.
If put end-to-end vertically,
they would make a pole forty-four
meters high, or two of twenty-two
meters, or...
PICARD
Thank you, Data.
DATA
You are welcome, sir.
A KNOCK on the door. Tasha is ushered in by the guard.
TASHA
She won't budge. She loves him
-- without reservation.
(to them all)
And she thinks I love him too.
DATA
Most interesting. Do you?
TASHA
Of course I don't, Data! As Troi
pointed out to me, I'm attracted
to him but that is entirely
different.
DATA
How so?
Picard is becoming amused at this.
PICARD
I'll agree it is puzzling, Data,
but since it involves Tasha's very
intimate and personal...
TASHA
It involves nothing I'm ashamed
of!
(to Data)
In fact, you may discover that
the very worst move of your life
was when you threw in with flesh
and blood humans.
DATA
(nodding gravely)
But certainly the most
interesting.
TASHA
Interesting? Data, I grew up on
a failed colony, completely
lawless, mad, where people took
what they wanted. This meant
males for the reason they're
bigger, stronger...
(to Troi)
And that's why I chose Starfleet
security, I guess.
TROI
(nods)
For reasons you should be very
proud of.
TASHA
(to Data)
Those were my early interests...
strength, daring, dominant
males... and that's why Lutan
attracts me. To me, he's like
a Federation Olympic Games hero.
But do I want to become his
so-called "First One," marry him?
That would be nonsense!
55 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD
A pause, then Picard draws himself up into a pose
resembling Data, and:
PICARD
Most interesting.
DATA
(turning, nodding)
Ah! You feel that also!
Smiles from all present. Picard now turns to Tasha,
very serious.
PICARD
And having laid all that out,
Lieut...
(corrects self)
Tasha... we come to a most serious
question...
RIKER'S COM VOICE
Riker to captain.
Picard touches his insignia.
PICARD
Go ahead. We're alone.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
We're fine tuned enough to see
your hosts gathering in the open
area outside with a number of them
now headed for your location.
PICARD
Thank you, Number One.
(turning to Tasha)
I was about to ask if considering
that background, your apprehension
by Lutan, all of that... do you
still feel ready to undergo this
challenge? Do you judge your
condition good?
From the door a LOUD KNOCK.
TASHA
I judge it excellent, sir.
Another KNOCK, insistent. Picard nods to Geordi who
opens the door. It REVEALS Hagon with TWO GUARDS who
carry two lacquered boxes each. The four boxes (the
SIZE OF HAT-BOXES) are labeled one through four by
ornate dot patterns. The boxes are placed on a low table.
HAGON
Your weapons, Lieutenant Yar.
You may pick your size.
They EXIT. Tasha goes slowly to the boxes, and opens
first one and then the others. She picks one glavin up
and holds it for the others to see. They look at it
with awe. It is a gauntlet-length oversized glove,
bulbous and almost basketball size. On the inside of
the wrist a down-curved claw projects. Out of the glove
itself stick a profusion of slender eight-inch long
needles, as if from a porcupine. A thin transparent
shield covers them. Tasha removes the cover.
56 CLOSE SHOT - THE GLAVIN IN TASHA'S HANDS
revealing the above details, but without any poison
demarcation.
GEORDI (V.O.)
Don't touch the spines! They're
poisoned.
57 OMITTED
58 BACK TO SHOT
Tasha looks at the glavin carefully, hefts it, touches
it, estimating it. Geordi comes over and looks at it
with her.
GEORDI
If you're not careful you could
kill yourself.
TASHA
(looks at spines; shakes
head)
These I understand.
From outside, they HEAR a metallic CLANGING. They stop,
and go to the window.
59 THEIR POV OUTSIDE - NIGHT
Outside, in the CENTERPLACE, the sharpened lengths of
steel have been vertically attached within a multi-level
rectangle. A number of these poles have horizontal
segments connecting them. Yareena, wearing workout
clothing, is maneuvering quickly from level to level,
carefully avoiding the sharpened spikes. She wears the
glavin on her left hand only, and uses the claw to give
her leverage while swinging over and under the
horizontal bars. It's obvious, as she climbs and jabs
and slashes out, that she's very good at this. She
never makes a mistake; the projecting needles never
touch a pole, and she never makes a misstep. Below her,
eight metallic objects outline the boundary of the
arena. Between each of these, perhaps twenty inches off
the ground, a brilliant green LIGHT BEAM defines the
outer limit of the rectangle. As a workman puts the
finishing touches on this apparatus, four additional
green LIGHT BEAMS suddenly appear, emanating straight
upward, from the four corners of the centermost section.
To check them, he interrupts one of the beams with a
stick of wood. It SIZZLES and begins to BURN.
60 BACK TO SHOT
They look at one another.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT FOUR
ACT FIVE
FADE IN:
61 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
The starship steady in her orbit.
RIKER (V.O.)
First Officer's log, supplemental.
Captain Picard, faced with a
critical need for a vaccine
produced on this planet...
62 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ESTABLISHING, THEN PANNING RIKER
during which, he leaves his command position, CROSSES
toward the turbolift. A crewman is at Conn, rear
stations are manned.
RIKER (V.O.)
(continuing)
... has permitted Lieutenant
Natasha Yar to engage in a fight
to the death. I have yet to
understand his reasoning or his
plan.
Reaching the turbolift, Riker discovers Wesley standing
half out of sight inside -- off the bridge. He stops;
they eye each other. Then, gesturing:
RIKER
Care to lend a hand?
WESLEY
Yes sir!
He bounds onto the Bridge as Riker EXITS by Turbolift.
63 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL)
as Data BEAMS IN. When fully arrived he turns to the
Transporter Chief who is monitoring his viewer...
DATA
Was I seen leaving?
63 CONTINUED:
TRANSPORTER CHIEF
(shakes head)
They've got eyes only for the
program.
Riker ENTERS, Data nods at him. Then he includes
Transporter Chief, saying:
DATA
Captain Picard wanted no risk of
our communications being
overheard. You're to proceed now,
as he indicated.
Beverly Crusher ENTERS over the last of this. She
carries a medical tricorder and a couple of instruments
including a contact hypo. She indicates these to Riker.
BEVERLY
Captain's orders here, too.
RIKER
(to Data)
Does the Captain understand what
you and Geordi reported about
those weapons? They're razor
sharp, split-second lethal...
DATA
(nods)
I am here to brief you on what he
plans.
64 INT. CENTERPLACE - NIGHT
The Centerplace is alive with a gathering group of
official spectators, who are seating themselves around
Lutan and Hagon. Picard, Troi, Geordi, followed by
Tasha and a guard, ENTER SHOT. Tasha wears the
glavin with its protective covering. We begin to HEAR
A RATTLE of ivory-like sticks from the Spectators.
TASHA
(to Picard)
Any last minute instructions, sir?
64 CONTINUED:
PICARD
(nods; then)
Stay alive. We'll hope to do the
rest.
65 ANGLE TO INCLUDE YAREENA
as she ENTERS with a Female Aide. LOUDER LIGONIAN
RATTLING. A Guard motions Yareena and Tasha into the
combat area. A worker prepares to activate the
light-beam boundary. When it's quiet, Hagon rises
and addresses the gathering.
HAGON
I speak for Lutan. The rules are
known; let combat continue until
there is a victor. It will not
be interrupted.
(looks at combatants)
Proceed.
Again a RATTLING OF STICKS as Tasha and Yareena ENTER
the structure at opposite sides. The worker ACTIVATES
the LIGHT-BEAM boundary. Then SILENCE from the
Spectators as Tasha and Yareena immediately begin
working their way through the structure.
66 CLOSER ON THE COMBAT - NIGHT - (INTERCUT WITH
SPECTATOR REACTION)
Tasha goes quickly for the center to defend from there,
not sure exactly what to expect. Yareena, very sure of
herself, climbs with agility. The glavin never gets too
near her body. The glavins CLANG as each of the women
climbs.
67 CLOSE ON YAREENA
Her eyes bright, her expression cold. She appears to
always figure at least one move ahead.
68 CLOSE ON TASHA
learning as she goes. She makes her moves without
flare, steadily and carefully feeling her way. At the
moment, it looks as if she's no match for Yareena.
69 ON THEM BOTH - COMBAT SQUARE ONLY
Yareena suddenly speeds up, agilely climbing higher than
Tasha. Gracefully, she also circles to get behind her.
Tasha turns barely quickly enough to defend herself.
Stopping, darting away, and coming from unexpected
angles, Yareena forces Tasha to change position. Tasha
at first clambers horizontally, then, aware of what's
happening, climbs higher to get away from her, but can't
do it without turning her back.
Yareena jabs out at her, managing to drive and corner
her on the highest level of the arena. Again she jabs
with her glavin, just missing. There's a GASP from the
audience. Yareena inches closer, leaning out and
continuing to jab.
70 ANGLE ON LUTAN
Not at all as unconcerned as he indicates to Picard.
71 CLOSE ON TASHA
Tasha folds her arms and dives beneath the horizontal
pole, landing on her feet -- but loses her balance, and
falls within the innermost section.
72 BACK TO SHOT
Instantly, Yareena climbs toward her for the kill. As
she raises her glavin to strike the final blow, her arm
extends too far back, causing a metallic section of the
glavin to brush against one of the brightly glowing
vertical LIGHT BEAMS. This results in a shower of
SPARKS and a reactive force so strong that it throws
Yareena's arm forward with such speed that the glavin
is hurled out of the arena and into the first row of
spectators.
73 ANGLE ON LUTAN
Lutan rises, shouting.
LUTAN
Combatants, hold your positions!
(he turns to a guard)
Return the weapon!
73 CONTINUED:
Yareena and Tasha remain stationary as a smiling
spectator, into whose lap the glavin has fallen,
gingerly hands it to the guard. His smile quickly turns
to a grimace of horror as he notices a thin line of
blood on his thigh. His face contorts as the poison
instantly takes effect. As the glavin is carefully
returned to Yareena, WE SEE two sentries removing the
spectator's body.
74 CLOSE ON THEM BOTH
With Yareena re-armed, Tasha aggressively advances
toward her.
75 ANGLE ON HAGON
Very concerned now.
HAGON
Yareena! Careful!
76 ANGLE ON ARENA
Tasha moves rapidly to the outside, drawing Yareena up
to follow her, then simulates losing her balance and
fake-falls, flailing, toward the ground. She appears to
be caught on the lower rungs without being able to free
herself. Yareena drops deftly to her feet alongside
her, stands over her and is about to shove the deadly
spines of the glavin into her when Tasha kicks out with
her foot, catching Yareena's leg. Yareena stumbles.
Tasha gets to her feet and hurls herself at Yareena,
getting on top of her. Her claw grazes Yareena's
shoulder, ripping her garment and causing blood to flow.
STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 54.
77 ANGLE EMPHASIZING YAREENA
staring in horror at the thin TRAIL of blood. She
starts slowly to rise up. The spectators gasp, waiting
for Yareena to die.
78 ANGLE EMPHASIZING TASHA (OPTICAL)
as she suddenly throws herself bodily across Yareena
and both of them begin to SHIMMER -- and then are BEAMED
AWAY.
79 FULL SHOT
The crowd rises to its feet in surprise, then anger and
SHOUTING. They begin to throw their ivory-like sticks
toward the arena, then at our Away Party which quickly
moves to one side, standing close.
80 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL)
Security -- and Beverly, Data, and Riker -- are waiting
as the supine bodies of Tasha and Yareena appear on the
transporter pads.
RIKER
Move!
Tasha rises as security people grab Yareena and very
carefully remove her glavin. She appears to be almost
dead -- perhaps completely so. Tasha removes her own.
Beverly moves forward to administer a hypo to Yareena.
TASHA
We're too late; she's growing
cold.
BEVERLY
Sorry that clashes with my
instructions...
The hypo administered, Beverly begins monitoring Yareena
on the medical tricorder.
81 CLOSE ON YAREENA
Not a pretty angle since she indeed looks dead.
82 CLOSE ON TASHA
Horror stricken at what she has done.
82 CONTINUED:
TASHA
On no, no...
83 INT. CENTERPLACE - EMPHASIZING PICARD AND LUTAN
with Troi, Geordi and Hagon looking on. Still angry
spectators in b.g.
PICARD
Exactly what do you find unfair,
Lutan? They fought to the death;
you saw the final blow; you know
the effects of your poison...
LUTAN
But what of your Lieutenant Yar?
She is to become my First One now.
PICARD
I certainly won't stop her -- if
she cares to claim that honor.
Lutan looks closely at Picard, beginning to realize that
Tasha may not want to be his First One. Hagon moves
in, comforting:
HAGON
But remember, you now have all
Yareena's lands and wealth, Lutan.
LUTAN
(with a wry smile at
Hagon)
At least, all has not been lost.
Over which we have HEARD the COMMUNICATOR SOUND, and
Picard touches his insignia.
PICARD
Picard here.
This amazes Lutan and Hagon too -- it is the first
they've known of this communication system.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
Since you've fulfilled your
agreement, Captain, can we now
beam the vaccine aboard?
LUTAN
Ah, yes... of course.
83 CONTINUED:
PICARD
No problem, Number One. Send down
someone from medical.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
And to complete our business here,
we are locked onto you.
PICARD
Five to beam up. Energize.
This startles Lutan and Hagon. They are in the act of
protesting as the TRANSPORTER EFFECT begins.
84 EXT. SPACE - ORBITAL ANGLE (OPTICAL)
The starship Enterprise.
RIKER (V.O.)
First Officer's log, Stardate
41235.6. I am returning the conn
to Captain Picard...
85 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT
Riker still at Command Center as:
RIKER (V.O.)
(continuing)
... as we begin loading the vaccine
supply aboard. Shortly, we hope
to signal "mission complete."
During which Picard, Lutan, Hagon and Troi ENTER from
a turbolift. Riker sees them, rises, and indicates in
the proper direction. Wesley makes himself small in
the bridge position he occupies.
RIKER
Welcome back, Captain, and you're
wanted in the lounge.
PICARD
(to his guests)
This way, gentlemen.
They MOVE ON as indicated. Troi remains on the
bridge.
86 INT. LOUNGE - ANGLE ON SIDE OF DOORS
as they OPEN, REVEALING Picard with Lutan and
Hagon who react in surprise at what they see inside.
87 WIDE ANGLE - EMPHASIZING LOUNGE OCCUPANTS
which are Tasha, Beverly... and Yareena, looking very
alive. On the table there is the fateful glavin,
medical tricorder and instruments. Accepting what he
sees, Lutan reacts angrily.
LUTAN
She is not dead! There was no
death combat; you have violated
our agreement. There will be no
treaty, no vaccine... !
PICARD
The challenge was carried out.
She died, Lutan.
LUTAN
There was no challenge! She is
alive.
Beverly picks up the glavin, moves to Lutan, holding
it very close to him.
BEVERLY
I am a physician and saw her die.
If you doubt this poison, why not
test it on yourself?
Lutan has flinched away from it. Picard moves in.
PICARD
Lutan, we can provide you with
the medical records to prove her
death and how Doctor Crusher
brought her back.
Yareena is enjoying this as she makes eye contact with
Tasha who nods approvingly.
YAREENA
And at the instant of death,
Lutan, a mating agreement
dissolves.
Yareena moves toward Lutan.
LUTAN
But this is witchcraft, Yareena.
To discard a mate in that
manner...
YAREENA
... is less painful than the one
you selected for me.
87 CONTINUED:
She reaches out and takes the ornate red-stone necklace
from his neck.
LUTAN
No, Yareena...
But he stands unresistingly as she turns with it, faces
Hagon.
YAREENA
Even as I battled, Hagon, I heard
you calling out for me.
She raises the necklace. Hagon nods.
HAGON
Be my First One, Yareena.
She places it around his neck.
YAREENA
All my land, all my goods, all
I have... is yours to rule.
A low SOB from Tasha, drawing startled looks from Picard.
TASHA
That's so beautiful.
(to Lutan)
And so sad for you. You've lost
everything.
LUTAN
I have my honor.
And it is true that Lutan still has his head held
proudly high. Tasha looks at him, then to Yareena.
TASHA
It's such a... a waste!
YAREENA
Do you want him?
Tasha is startled, looks to the Captain, then back.
TASHA
No, there would be...
complications.
87 CONTINUED: (2)
YAREENA
(to Lutan)
Then I will have you as my Number
Two.
(indicates)
Take your place accordingly.
Lutan moves to stand slightly behind Hagon.
HAGON
As you see, Captain, you may excel
in technology... but not in
civilized behavior.
88 EXT. SPACE - THE U.S.S. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
still in orbit of Ligon II.
89 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Fully manned... in fact, too fully. Picard ENTERS,
then senses something awry. He looks around, puzzled at
this. Then he looks toward the Ops station where
Wesley has been hoping to pass unnoticed.
PICARD
What the... !
(starts again)
Ah yes, Wesley.
RIKER
(overlap)
Wesley!
(quickly to Picard)
He'd been manning that station
for me. I forgot.
Wesley has come up out of the seat, looking apprehensive
as he stands somewhat at attention.
PICARD
Well!
(beat)
Thank you again for manning one
of our bridge stations. We'll
see you get another chance.
WESLEY
Yes sir!
Again, those words are an elixir which sends Wesley
happily on his way.
89 CONTINUED:
PICARD
What's the delay, Number One?
Why aren't we warping out of here?
RIKER
Set course for Styris IV, Warp
three.
GEORDI
Course laid in for Styris IV, sir.
RIKER
Engage!
90 EXT. SPACE - THE U.S.S. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
moving off from Ligon II, then WARP SPEED OPTICAL.
FADE OUT.
END ACT FIVE
THE END